Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇120詞左右的英語短文。

A group of frogs were travailing through the woods. And two of them fell into a deep pit. When the other frogs saw how deep the pit was, they told the two that they were as good as dead. The two frogs didn’t listen and tried to jump out of the pit with all their might. The other frogs kept telling them to stop. Finally, one of the frogs heard what other frogs were saying and gave up, so he died.

The other frog went on jumping as hard as he could. Once again, the other frogs cried at him and told him to stop and just allow himself to die. He jumped even harder and finally made himself out. When he got out, the other frogs said,“ Didn’t you hear us?” the frog explained to them that something was wrong with his hearing. He thought they were encouraging him the whole time.

There is power of life and death in the tongue. An encouraging word to someone who is down can lift him or her up and help them make it through the day. Be careful what you say. Speak life to those who cross your path. The power of words --- anyone can speak bad words that rob another of the spirit to go on in difficult times. But an encouraging word can go such a long time.

【寫作內(nèi)容】 以約150個詞就“ 語言的力量”發(fā)表你的看法和感受，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 語言在生活中的真負面影響；

2. 舉一個發(fā)生在你或你認識的人身上的例子，說明語言的正或負 面的影響。

3.日常生活中我們應(yīng)該如何利用好語言，讓語言產(chǎn)生積極的影響。

【寫作要求】 在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

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Answer 1

【答案】

We use words every day but not all of us realize their powerful influence. A student will spare no efforts to study because of others’ inspiring words. On the country, if he is told that there is no possibility for him to succeed, he may really give up and end up as a failure totally.

My friend Jim had a traffic accident and got severely hurt. Though the chances for his recovery were little, her mother decided to tell him a lie in order to cheer him up. It was the power of words that actually helped her stand up and walk again.

In conclusion, when faced with negative and discouraging remarks, we ought to turn a deaf ear to them as they will destroy our hope and faith. What matters more to us are those positive words that make us highly inspired and motivated. In the meantime, give our positive words to people around us because they will give us theirs in return.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語spare no efforts to不遺余力做某事；give up放棄；tell sb a lie說謊；In conclusion綜上所述；turn a deaf ear to充耳不聞；It was the power of words that actually helped her stand up and walk again這個句子運用到強調(diào)句；In conclusion, when faced with negative and discouraging remarks, we ought to turn a deaf ear to them as they will destroy our hope and faith.這個句子中運用到faced非謂語動詞做狀語；What matters more to us are those positive words that make us highly inspired and motivated.這個句子what引導主語從句；