Question

18．以Facing the challenges of our life為題，寫一篇120字左右的文章，內(nèi)容包括：
1．你認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)如何看待生活中的考驗(yàn)．
2．舉例說(shuō)明你經(jīng)歷過(guò)的一次困難或考驗(yàn)，及如何應(yīng)對(duì)．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇要點(diǎn)文．寫作時(shí)，首先要寫清要點(diǎn)，包括：點(diǎn)明主題如何看待生活中的挑戰(zhàn)，舉例說(shuō)明，總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)；其次要注意以第一人稱來(lái)現(xiàn)身說(shuō)法；最后要注意舉例時(shí)，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，表達(dá)過(guò)去的事實(shí)．表明觀點(diǎn)和總結(jié)時(shí)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：
be of+名詞，表示事物的特征和屬性
overcome difficulties 克服困難
remind sb of sth 讓某人想起某事
stick to the end 堅(jiān)持到最后
come across 遇到
make the best of sth 充分利用
Only by facing and overcoming difficulties in our life can we grow up happily and healthily．
句中only加狀語(yǔ)提前，句子要部分倒裝．
It was the first time I had lived away from my home，so I found it difficult to fit in．
句中it was the first time后接從句時(shí)，從句要用過(guò)去完成時(shí)態(tài)，和前面的was保持一致；find it+形容詞+動(dòng)詞不定式，it作形式賓語(yǔ)，正在的賓語(yǔ)是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式．
the  difficulties I came across have now become a precious memory in my life．
句中I came across作difficulties的定語(yǔ)，是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句．
Let's learn to regard the challenges of life we are facing as a stepping-stone to future success and make the best of them!
句中we are facing作challenges的定語(yǔ)，是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句；and連接并列謂語(yǔ)．

解答 Challenges of life are of great importance in our growth．As the saying goes，"No cross，no crown．"Only by facing and overcoming difficulties in our life can we grow up happily and healthily．（高分句型一）（點(diǎn)題）
 It reminds me of my experience when I joined in the military training after I entered senior high school．It was the first time I had lived away from my home，so I found it difficult to fit in．（高分句型二）And the training officer was strict with us．I once thought I couldn't stick to the end．But anyway，I made it．The trials made it easier for me to adapt to life in high school，and the  difficulties I came across have now become a precious memory in my life．（高分句型三）（舉例）
In short，life consists of not only sunshine but also hardships．We should be brave in front of difficulties．Let's learn to regard the challenges of life we are facing as a stepping-stone to future success and make the best of them!（高分句型四）（總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫對(duì)；過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．