Question

【題目】2010年央視春晚的廣告收入創(chuàng)新高，但節(jié)目中的植入廣告引發(fā)了熱議。最近，某網(wǎng)站舉行了一次題為“對今年春晚植入廣告的態(tài)度”的調(diào)查，請根據(jù)以下餅圖（pie chart）所示信息用英語寫一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。

注意：

1、對所給提示，不要簡單翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫

2、詞數(shù)150左右，開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。

3、植入廣告：product placement

The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.

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Answer 1

【答案】The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.

As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable, for the product placement appears in the programmes naturally. And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself.

However, among the people surveyed, more than one third of them complain that the product placement has nothing to do with the programmes. 25% of them even feel hurt seeing so much of it. Furthermore, the rest 10% hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of CCTV.

From the chart we can draw a conclusion that most of the people surveyed are against product placement in the programmes. In my opinion, product placement nowadays is almost unavoidable, but it should not damage the art of the show and should take the audience’s feelings into account. (151 words)

【解析】這是一篇圖表類作文。文章內(nèi)容要點已經(jīng)給出。同學(xué)們在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點：1.注意時態(tài)。 本篇作文是人們對春晚廣告植入態(tài)度的描述，主要為歸納客觀事實，通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。

注意內(nèi)容與要點。 對文章要點描述齊全，但是不要對要點進行簡單的羅列�？梢詫�餅狀圖中五種不同態(tài)度分成兩種基本的觀點，肯定或否定等。在兩個大類下再分開描述各種不同態(tài)度。也可以使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程�？梢远嘤脦讉�不同句式表達，增添文章可讀性。

表明自己態(tài)度。根據(jù)個人喜好，明確表達自己對春晚植入廣告的態(tài)度，給出合理理由。

【范文亮點】

采用了定語從句（As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable.和 And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself.）以及it作形式主語的句子（And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement.）。

采用了however；has nothing to do；furthermore；hold the view that；draw a conclusion；take the audience’s feelings into account等高級單詞或短語，靈活多樣，增添文章看點。