6．假定你是高中生李華，對(duì)西方文化非常感興趣，想在暑假去英國(guó)旅游．請(qǐng)你給你的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友戴維（David）發(fā)一封電子郵件．內(nèi)容包括：
1．旅游目的；   2．旅游計(jì)劃；    3．需要的幫助．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
特別提醒：字跡模糊潦草，卷面不整潔，不分段落直接扣除2-5分．

分析 這是一篇材料類(lèi)作文，假定是高中生李華，對(duì)西方文化非常感興趣，想在暑期去英國(guó)旅游．給英國(guó)網(wǎng)友戴維（David）發(fā)一封電子郵件．內(nèi)容包括：旅游目的；旅游計(jì)劃；需要的幫助．詞數(shù)100左右，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
文中第一段直接點(diǎn)題說(shuō)明要點(diǎn)，并在最后加以說(shuō)明發(fā)電子郵件的目的．第二段包含了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，并在最后用問(wèn)句形式點(diǎn)明"迫切需要幫助"緊扣主題．并在第三段適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，表示感謝．整篇文章從語(yǔ)法來(lái)看，沒(méi)犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤；從內(nèi)容上看簡(jiǎn)潔明了，符合英文電子郵件的特點(diǎn)，讓人讀起朗朗上口，是一篇很值得借鑒的文章．
亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：
范文使用了一些重要的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句so that I can experience English culture personally；賓語(yǔ)從句 which places of interest are well worth visiting；固定句型This is the …time that sb．have/has done sth．
范文注意使用了現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)等不同的時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)敘述不同的事情，對(duì)時(shí)態(tài)有較好的把握．
范文運(yùn)用一些亮點(diǎn)詞匯詞組如be well worth visiting、tourist attraction、appreciate等使作文內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)，表達(dá)更加生動(dòng)．
I have been expecting to travel to the UK so that I can experience English culture personally．（高分句型一）
Since this is the first time that I have traveled abroad，I would like to know which places of interest are well worth visiting．（高分句型二）
 I would appreciate it if you could write back to me soon．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear David，
      I have been expecting to travel to the UK so that I can experience English culture personally．（高分句型一） I am writing to ask for some advice．
      My parents and I plan to travel to the UK during the summer holidays．We are to spend a week in London．Since this is the first time that I have traveled abroad，I would like to know which places of interest are well worth visiting．（高分句型二）Can you offer me some advice and recommend some tourist attractions to me？
      I would appreciate it if you could write back to me soon．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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