Question

Ladies and Gentlemen：

Welcomed to the West Lake. First of all, let me make a brief introduction for it .

    The West Lake like a shining pearl lying in the west of Hangzhou City. Surrounded by hill on the three sides, it is famous for it beautiful scenery, a plenty of historic sites and a variety of local products. Legend has it that the West Lake was a jewel falling from heaven when geologists insist this place had been a shallow sea gulf before it became that it is today. In any case, the West Lake inspired poets and painters for centuries. Enjoy your trip. Thank you !

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 welcome d--welcome

 for- to

 ∧is like

 hill-hills

 it-its

 a plenty of a 去掉

 falling –fallen

 when – while

 that –what

 has inspired

【解析】

試題分析：西湖位于杭州市的西部，三面環(huán)山，周圍有很多歷史遺跡。它就像一顆珍珠，吸引著很多的游客來到這里參觀。傳說中的西湖是一顆散落在人間的珍珠，而地質(zhì)學(xué)家認為在西湖形成今天這個樣子之前，它曾是一個淺淺的海灣。

 考查固定句型。Welcomed to the West Lake. Welcome在此是感嘆詞，welcome to some place“歡迎某人到某地”，所以把welcomed改為welcome。

 考查介詞用法。let me make a brief introduction for it ，make an introduction to sb、sth“對。。做介紹”，所以把for改為to。

 考查謂語動詞。The West Lake like a shining pearl 。like做動詞意思是“喜歡”，當介詞時意思是“像”。此句意思是西湖像一顆閃光的珍珠，所以在like前加is。

 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。Surrounded by hill on the three sides,hill是可數(shù)名詞， 西湖三面環(huán)山，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)，把hill改為hills。

 考查代詞用法。it is famous for it beautiful scenery根據(jù)句意可知西湖是以它的風(fēng)景而聞名，所以把 it改為its，表示所屬關(guān)系。

 考查冠詞用法。a plenty of historic sites固定短語plenty of “大量，許多” ，所以a plenty of前面去掉a。

 考查非謂語動詞。the West Lake was a jewel falling from heaven 從語法可知現(xiàn)在分詞做定語表示主動或者進行，而此時a jewel和后面的fall 是表示動作的完成，所以把falling 改為fallen。

 考查連詞。when geologists insist this place had been a shallow sea gulf 根據(jù)上下文可知此處表示前后內(nèi)容的對比，傳說中西湖是天堂掉下來的珍珠，而地理學(xué)家堅持認為西湖是一個淺的海灣，所以把when 改為 while。

 考查名詞性從句的連接詞。before it became that it is today 從結(jié)構(gòu)可知became后是賓語從句，從句意思不完整，所以把that 改為what。

 考查動詞時態(tài)。The West Lake inspired poets and painters for centuries從語境可知此句應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在完成時，表示持續(xù)到現(xiàn)在的狀況，所以在inspired前加has。

考點：考查短文改錯。