Question

16．請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合生活中的一個事例，就"樂觀"這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文．
Optimism always leads to happiness，health and success while pessimism，by contrast，results in hopelessness，sickness and failure．That's because optimists and pessimists deal with the same challenge and disappointment in different ways．
注意：1．不得照抄英語提示語；
2．需結(jié)合一個事例；
3．字數(shù)100-120．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時不僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要．
亮點句型一：If you can change your mind from pessimism，you can change your life．如果你能改變你的悲觀思想，你可以改變你的生活．If you can change your mind from pessimism是本句中的條件狀語從句．
亮點句型二：When I was fed up with reading or writing，I usually entertained myself by reading some interesting English stories，jokes and humors or seeing English films．當我厭倦了閱讀或?qū)懽�，我通常通過閱讀一些有趣的英語故事、笑話、幽默或看英文電影來娛樂．When I was fed up with reading or writing是由when引導的時間狀語從句．

解答 Optimism is important in all aspects of our life．If you can change your mind from pessimism，you can change your life．（亮點句型一）
     Up to the beginning of Senior Grade Two，I did poorly in my English but I didn't give in because I was always encouraged by both the people around me and myself．I kept practicing speaking，listening，reading and writing．When I was fed up with reading or writing，I usually entertained myself by reading some interesting English stories，jokes and humors or seeing English films．（亮點句型二）When I had some trouble in reciting or memorizing，I tried to amuse myself by playing word games or singing English songs．By this means，I always made myself cheerful and optimistic，full of splendid and colorful dreams of future．I kept practicing．Gradually，I made progress in my English．
     Thanks to the optimism，I have become one of the top students in my class by now．

點評 考查開放性作文寫作，開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示．給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大．對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力．在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．