Question

11．某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社開辟了中學(xué)生習(xí)作專欄．本期的話題是：注重日常學(xué)習(xí)、工作和生活中的細(xì)節(jié)，因?yàn)榧?xì)節(jié)往往決定成�。�請(qǐng)你以"We Should Pay Much Attention to Details"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱囊恍┛捶ǎ?br />注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右；  
2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)本人相關(guān)信息．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時(shí)不僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn't pay much attention to details．有些人認(rèn)為想取得巨大成功的人不應(yīng)該太在意細(xì)節(jié)．這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句who wants to achieve great success，先行詞是one．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：But sometimes it is the details that determine our success，for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we're doing．但有時(shí)是細(xì)節(jié)決定了我們的成功，因?yàn)樗麄兛赡苁菍?duì)我們正在做的事情有很大影響．這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是that determine our success；that has a great impact on what we're doing是定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞thing，在這個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句中what we're doing是介詞on的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 We should Pay Much Attention to Details
   Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn't pay much attention to details．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）But sometimes it is the details that determine our success，for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we're doing．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）Since we have realized the importance of details，what should we do？First，we should form the habit of being careful，because a careful person will rarely overlook details．What's more，we should learn to keep t he balance of quantity and quality．We may find that when faced with lots of work，the faster we do it，the more mistakes we will make．Why？Because when we work at high speed，the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect the details．
   As far as I'm concerned，we should keep it in mind that quality comes first，without which quantity is of no significance．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查開放性作文寫作，開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示．給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大．對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力．在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．