Question

【題目】書面表達(滿分25分）

現(xiàn)在孩子和父母之間的代溝越來越深。據(jù)估計，75%的父母抱怨他們孩子不合理的行為，而孩子們認為父母太落伍。請按照要求寫一篇短文：要求：1.介紹現(xiàn)狀； 2.分析原因； 3.提出解決方法；

注意：1. 詞數(shù)： 120 左右；

2. 內(nèi)容充實，語言連貫通順;

3. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Nowadays, there are more misunderstandings between parents and children which is so-called generation gap.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, there are more misunderstandings between parents and children which is so-called generation gap. It is estimated that 75% of parents often complain their children’s unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old-fashioned.

The reasons for the phenomenon can be listed as follows：The first one is that the two generations have grown up at different times, thus the disagreement often arises between them. Besides, due to having little in common to talk about, they are not willing to sit face to face. What’s more, with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, both of them can’t spare enough time to exchange ideas. To sum up, the main cause is due to lack of communication and understanding each other.

It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing,children should respect their parents. On the other hand, parents also should understand their children. All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是開放式作文，話題是父母和孩子之間的代溝，分析題目可知文章要分三段：第一段介紹情況，第二段分析原因，第三段提出解決方法。注意段落分明，要使用適當?shù)亩陶Z和句型，讓文章有檔次。

【亮點】

本文較好完成了題目規(guī)定的任務(wù)，要點齊全、層次清楚、行文連貫。用詞不落俗套。如用詞組：as follows如下：face to face面對面. To sum up總之, due to因為，由于，還使用了多變得句型： It is estimated that …這樣的固定句型， The first one is that the two generations have grown up at different times, thus the disagreement often arises between them. 這里有表語從句， with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, 這里使用了with復合結(jié)構(gòu)。It is high time that something were done upon it. 這是一個虛擬語氣的句式，還有文章注重關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用，如： Besides, What’s more, For one thing, On the other hand,這樣使文章更連貫。