Question

6．假如你是銀川一中高一年級(jí)的李華，一直以來(lái)你的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)不好．準(zhǔn)備利用周末時(shí)間進(jìn)行提高．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給外教Harveer寫(xiě)一封信．內(nèi)容包括：
1．你目前英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)現(xiàn)狀（如英語(yǔ)課堂上、遇到外國(guó)朋友時(shí)等）
2．請(qǐng)他就如何提高英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)提一些建議
注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Harveer，
I'd like to take the advantage of the weekends to improve my spoken English and I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor．
I have had much difficulty in speaking English though I'm good at writing and English grammar．Whatmakes things worse is that my pronunciationis so bad that I have no confidence to speak or answer questions in English class，especially when we have a discussion in group work．What's more，I don't know how to start a conversation in English when I come across foreigners，let alone to chat with them freely．I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to improve it and it would be better if you could help me in person．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是銀川一中高一年級(jí)的李華，一直以來(lái)你的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)不好．準(zhǔn)備利用周末時(shí)間進(jìn)行提高．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給外教Harveer寫(xiě)一封信，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：你目前英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)現(xiàn)狀（如英語(yǔ)課堂上、遇到外國(guó)朋友時(shí)等）請(qǐng)他就如何提高英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)提一些建議2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：take the advantage of 利用；do me a favor幫我一下；have difficulty in doing sth做…方面有困難；What's more而且；let alone更不要說(shuō)；
I'd like to take the advantage of the weekends to improve my spoken English and I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor．（高分句型一）
What makes things worse is that my pronunciation is so bad that I have no confidence to speak or answer questions in English class，especially when we have a discussion in group work．（高分句型二）
I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to improve it and it would be better if you could help me in person．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Harveer，
      I'd like to take the advantage of the weekends to improve my spoken English and I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor．（高分句型一）
      I have had much difficulty in speaking English though I'm good at writing and English grammar．What makes things worse is that my pronunciation is so bad that I have no confidence to speak or answer questions in English class，especially when we have a discussion in group work．（高分句型二）What's more，I  don't know how to start a conversation in English when I come across foreigners，let alone to chat with them freely．I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to improve it and it would be better if you could help me in person．（高分句型三）
       Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．