Question

Dear Wang Ming,
I received your email yesterday. You asked me what I was doing recently. To tell you the truth, I am learning Chinese by myself. I want to go to Beijing this summer, but I don’t know how to learn it well. Could you give me some advice?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
David
假如你叫王明，請(qǐng)根據(jù)David的來(lái)信，用英文給他寫(xiě)一封回信，介紹學(xué)習(xí)中文的方法，提出你的建議。要點(diǎn)如下：
漢語(yǔ)很有用。
盡可能多地記中國(guó)字。
訓(xùn)練聽(tīng)力。
用漢語(yǔ)與你周?chē)�的人交流�?br />多讀多寫(xiě)很重要。
不要逐字翻譯，可根據(jù)實(shí)際情況適當(dāng)增加或刪減要點(diǎn)。字?jǐn)?shù)控制在100字以內(nèi)。
Dear David,
I’m glad to know that you’ll come to Beijing.
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Looking forward to seeing you in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming

Answer 1

Dear David,
I’m glad to know that you’ll come to Beijing.
As we all know, Chinese is a very useful language and many people in the world are learning it now. If you want to learn it well, you have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It is also important for you to do some reading and writing. I think you can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. If you have any questions, please write to me.
Looking forward to seeing you in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming

試題分析：題目要求用英文寫(xiě)一封回信，向David介紹學(xué)習(xí)中文的方法，并提出建議。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)比較詳細(xì)，學(xué)生容易構(gòu)思，但不能逐句翻譯，要注意句與句、段與段之間的銜接和連貫。注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的使用要得當(dāng)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，可以適當(dāng)使用一些定語(yǔ)從句。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了很多短語(yǔ)，顯得通俗易懂。使用的短語(yǔ)有：As we all know, have to, as many Chinese words as possible, talk with, in Chinese, write to等；使用的重要語(yǔ)法知識(shí)有：條件狀語(yǔ)從句If you want to learn it well, 固定句型It is also important for you to do, 固定搭配not only...but also, Do your best to do sth等。