16.假設(shè)你叫李鳴,得知鄭州國際會展中心(ZZICEC)正在招募志愿者的消息,你想在2017年暑假當(dāng)志愿者,現(xiàn)在你需要根據(jù)志愿者的報名條件寫一封英文申請信.
志愿者報名條件:
1. 年齡大于15歲,身體健康;  2. 英語口語好,樂于助人; 3. 能參加培訓(xùn),寒假期間能連續(xù)服務(wù)兩周以上.
注意:詞數(shù)100左右,信的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù).
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a senior one student,applying to be a volunteer for ZZICEC in the summer of 2016.
I'm 16 years old.I think I'm old enough to have some social service so that I can gain more experience.(高分句型一)English is my favorite at school and I can express myself well in English.Being healthy and active,I'm glad to help others.I hope to improve myself by volunteering and giving help to people.Next winter I will have a two-month holiday.I prefer a different holiday then.I hope I can join in the training activities and work for ZZICEC.(高分句型二)
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming.

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你叫李鳴,得知鄭州國際會展中心(ZZICEC)正在招募志愿者的消息,你想在2017年暑假當(dāng)志愿者,現(xiàn)在你需要根據(jù)志愿者的報名條件寫一封英文申請信.寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:年齡大于15歲,身體健康; 英語口語好,樂于助人; 能參加培訓(xùn),寒假期間能連續(xù)服務(wù)兩周以上. 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:apply to申請;join in 參加;express myself 表達自我;look forward to 盼望;social service社會服務(wù)
I think I'm old enough to have some social service so that I can gain more experience.(高分句型一)
I hope I can join in the training activities and work for ZZICEC.(高分句型二)

解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
      I am a senior one student,applying to be a volunteer for ZZICEC in the summer of 2017.I'm 16 years old.I think I'm old enough to have some social service so that I can gain more experience.(高分句型一)English is my favorite at school and I can express myself well in English.Being healthy and active,I'm glad to help others.I hope to improve myself by volunteering and giving help to people.Next winter I will have a two-month holiday.I prefer a different holiday then.I hope I can join in the training activities and work for ZZICEC.(高分句型二)
      I'm looking forward to your reply.
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Ming

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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