7.The other day,BBC broadcast its documentary(紀(jì)錄片)"Are Our Kids Tough Enough?-Chinese School",in which the British and Chinese teaching styles competed against each other,with both sides tested after four weeks to see who comes out on top.
In this unique experiment,five Chinese teachers took over a British classroom with 50teenagers aged 13and 14in a British school for one month and taught them in a typical Chinese way:no talking,no questions and experiencing the severe classroom discipline within an extended school-hour from 7a.m.to 7p.m.In the meantime,another group of students were guided in the British teaching style:free talking,free questioning,thinking for themselves and relaxing learning atmosphere.
At the end of the documentary,all the pupils took part in the same exams in a few subjects.Next is the result.
MathematicsChineseScience
Chinese style67.7446.8858.33
British style54.8436.4650
Faced with the result,many netizens in Britain made a strong suggestion to their Education Minister that Britain should learn from China and adopt China's educational style.
[寫作內(nèi)容]
假設(shè)英國教育部長正在向中國學(xué)生征詢對上述建議的看法,請你給他寫封信表達(dá)你的看法.
1.用約 30 個單詞完成上文的概要;
2.用約 120 個單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn),你應(yīng)當(dāng)
(1)闡述你對"英國教育該不該采用中國方式"的看法;
(2  用 2-3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的觀點(diǎn).
[寫作要求]
1.寫作時不能直接引用原文語句;
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng).
Dear Minister,
I hear that 
                                                                         .It is said you are collecting opinions from Chinese students.The following is my view.
                                                               
Yours sincerely
A Chinese senior student.

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟:1. 認(rèn)真審題,找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句,確定中心思想.2. 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句,草擬提綱,梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3. 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài).注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次.4.最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等 
高分句型一:
I hear that many people in your country are suggesting Britain's education system should follow China's after a BBC documentary,which reported a 4-week experiment ending up with Chinese teaching methods defeating British ones 
我聽說你們國家很多人都認(rèn)為英國的教育制度應(yīng)遵循中國的英國廣播公司的紀(jì)錄片后,報道一項(xiàng)為期4周的實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)束了與語文教學(xué)方法打敗英國人. 
高分句型二:
On the other hand,Chinese students are suffering from a severe lack of sleep and good health,all due to the pursuit of a high score in numerous tests. 
另一方面,中國學(xué)生都患上了嚴(yán)重的睡眠和健康的缺乏,由于對許多考試高分的追求.

解答 Dear Minister,
       I hear that many people in your country are suggesting Britain's education system should follow China's after a BBC documentary,which reported a 4-week experiment ending up with Chinese teaching methods defeating British ones(高分句型一).  (30字內(nèi)容概要)
        It is said you are collecting opinions from Chinese students.The following is my view. 
        Personally,I strongly advise you forget Chinese style of education.On one hand,Chinese students wining in test scores is in fact at the cost of their creative abilities and autonomy in learning.As a matter of fact,many of my classmates could do nothing without teachers'and parents'help,let alone make great innovations in their later life.On the other hand,Chinese students are suffering from a severe lack of sleep and good health,all due to the pursuit of a high score in numerous tests(高分句型二).Without a healthy body,nothing is meaningful.Do you really want young Britons to spend 15 to 16 hours a day on study?
       Therefore,dear Minister,you should think twice if you decide to follow that suggestion. (120字發(fā)表觀點(diǎn))
                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                                                                             A Chinese Senior Student

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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