【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I live in a peacefully village in the countryside where we have many friendly neighbors. Several day ago, a heavy rain hit the surrounding region. Several dams in the upper reaches of the river was broken through, cause a flood in the river nearby. Two bridges were also washed away. When a flood drew back, many big fish were trapped in the river. They had raised in the dams. Every day, one of their neighbors went to catch up fish with a net.

Yesterday, the neighbor came to give us four big fresh fish, that had been frozen in his fridge. We had fish soup for lunch that day. What delicious!

【答案】1. peacefully→peaceful

2. day→days

3. was→were

4. cause→causing

5. a→the

6. raised前面加been

7. their→our

8.去掉up

9. that→which

10. What→How

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章介紹了作者村子發(fā)洪水，友好的鄰居給作者送魚的故事。

1.考查形容詞。此處修飾名詞village 應(yīng)用形容詞peaceful。故peacefully改為peaceful。

2.考查名詞的數(shù)。此處days是名詞復(fù)數(shù)，表示泛指，由前面的several可知應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故day改為days。

3.考查主謂一致。此處句子主語是名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式dams，謂語應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故was改為were。

4.考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知cause在句中做非謂語動(dòng)詞，表示“自然而然”的結(jié)果應(yīng)用動(dòng)詞的-ing形式causing。故cause改為causing。

5.考查冠詞。句意：洪水退去時(shí)，許多大魚被困在河里。此處the是定冠詞，此處表示特指這場(chǎng)洪水。故a改為the。

6.考查被動(dòng)語態(tài)。本句中主語與謂語動(dòng)詞構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系，且表示“過去的過去”應(yīng)用過去完成時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)。故raised前面加been。

7.考查代詞。句意：每天，我們的一個(gè)鄰居都去用網(wǎng)捕魚。此處指的是“我們的鄰居們”。故their改為our。

8. 考查副詞。此處catch是及物動(dòng)詞，意思是“抓住”，不需要與up連用。故去掉up。

9.考查定語從句。句意：昨天，鄰居來給我們四條新鮮的大魚，這些魚已經(jīng)被冷凍在他的冰箱里了。本句為此處為非限制性定語從句修飾先行詞four big fresh fish，且先行詞在從句中做主語，應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞which。故that改為which。

10.考查感嘆句。句意：多么美味��！此處how引導(dǎo)的是感嘆句，how用來感嘆形容詞delicious；而what則用來感嘆名詞。故What改為How。

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