Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

A Special Appointment

Years ago I moved to Woodland Hills to take a job in a small hospital’s emergency department. No one wanted to work on Christmas Eve, so the shift（輪班）went to me. I kissed my family goodbye and went off to spend the night in the hospital. It was a thankless job.

At 9 pm, the ambulance brought in a man in his 60s who was having a heart attack. His face was pale, and he was frightened. The whole night I did my best to save his life. Before I left in the morning to spend Christmas with my family, I stopped by to see how he was doing. It was still tough, but he had survived the night and was sleeping.

The following year I got Christmas Eve duty again. At 9 pm sharp, the ward clerk told me there was a couple who wanted to speak with me. When I approached them, the man introduced himself as Mr. Lee and said, “You probably don’t remember me, but last Christmas Eve you saved my life. Thank you for the year you gave me.” He and his wife hugged me, handed me a small gift, and left.

The following year a new doctor had joined the group, but I wanted to see if Mr. And Mrs. Lee would return. This time, I volunteered for the shift. I kept an eye on the door. Once again, at exactly 9 pm, the Lees appeared, carrying a warmly wrapped bundle. It was their new grandchild.

Mr. Lee, his family and I spent 13 Christmas Eves together. In the later years the staff all knew about the story and would work to give me time with him in the break room, where we spent a half-hour each Christmas Eve.

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

Paragraph 1:

Last year I saw Mrs. Lee alone in the hospital with a gift for me.

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Paragraph 2:

I carefully opened the package and found a crystal（水晶）bell inside with the word “Friendship” engraved（雕刻）on it.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

Last year I saw Mrs. Lee alone in the hospital with a gift for me. Mrs. Lee looked pale. She told me Mr. Lee died from another heart attack two days ago. But he had never forgot our appointment. He prepared the last gift days ago. They lived with a grateful heart and had a meaningful life for as long as 13 years. The appointment is a reminder of the fortune they got from me and the God.

Paragraph 2:

I carefully opened the package and found a crystal bell inside with the word “Friendship” engraved on it. Now, my family, my friends and I ring that bell on every Christmas Eve at exactly 9 pm and offer our best wishes to the man who we won’t forget. The bell always reminds us of being helpful to others and thankful to people who have helped me.

【解析】

這是一篇續(xù)寫。這篇文章講述了一個特殊的約定。作者圣誕節(jié)前夕在醫(yī)院值班，晚上救了一位患心臟病的病人，接下來患者李先生、他的家人和作者一起度過了13個平安夜。

1.第一段給出的首句是Last year I saw Mrs. Lee alone in the hospital with a gift for me.這一句是故事發(fā)展的轉(zhuǎn)折點。可以從“李太太臉色蒼白。她告訴我李先生兩天前又死于心臟病發(fā)作。”入手?jǐn)U展開去，——無論從何角度拓展，需注意與續(xù)寫第二段首句呼應(yīng)。

2.第二段所給首句I carefully opened the package and found a crystal（水晶）bell inside with the word “Friendship” engraved（雕刻）on it.這一句呼應(yīng)前文，緊接著可以從“現(xiàn)在，我的家人，我的朋友和我在每個圣誕夜的晚上9點準(zhǔn)時敲響這個鐘聲，并向我們永遠不會忘記的人致以最美好的祝愿。”入手續(xù)寫。