Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic jam: and accidents. As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed. When we cross streets, wait until the traffic light turn green. Next, don't forget walk on the pavement. Finally, I think it very dangerously to wear headphones while walking or cycling. Since we can't pay enough attention on the traffic around us, so accidents may happen. Taking good care of ourselves and don't let our parents worry about us.

Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic jam: and accidents.

jams

As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed. When we

a safety strictly

cross streets, wait until the traffic light turn green. Next, don't forget∧ walk on the pavement. Finally, I think it

turns to

very dangerously to wear headphones while walking or cycling. Since we can't pay enough attention on the traffic

dangerous to

around us, so accidents may happen. Taking good care of ourselves and don't let our parents worry about us.

Take

【解析】jam改為jams 2. As后面的the改為a 3.safe改為safety 4.strict改為strickly 5.turn改為turns 6.forget后加to 7.dangerously改為dangerous 8.attention后的on改為to 9. 去掉so 10.Taking改為Take

1.根據(jù)accidents可知用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把jam改為jams。

2.句意：作為一名學(xué)生。故把As后面的the改為a。

3.形容詞性物質(zhì)代詞修飾名詞，故把safe改為safety。

4.副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故把strict改為strickly 。

5.此處the traffic light是句子主語，句子用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，故把turn改為turns。

6.句意：不要忘了要在人行道上走。forget to do sth.忘記去做某事，故在forget后加to。

7.此處是形容詞做賓語補(bǔ)足語，故把dangerously改為dangerous。

8.固定詞組：pay attention to重視，故把attention后的on改為to。

9. 此處Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，不能和so在同一句中連用，故去掉so。

10.句意：照顧好我們自己，不要讓我們的父母擔(dān)憂我們。根據(jù)句意可知用祈使句，故把Taking改為Take。注意大寫開頭。