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13．你校學(xué)生會(huì)需招聘一名留學(xué)生做英語學(xué)習(xí)顧問（English Study Advisor），請(qǐng)你以短文形式寫一則招聘啟事．主要內(nèi)容包括：
（1）母語是英語，漢語流利者優(yōu)先；
（2）解答英語學(xué)習(xí)問題，協(xié)助組織英語活動(dòng)；
（3）每周 工作四小時(shí)，報(bào)酬面議；
（4）聯(lián)系人：李華（Tel.13011223344）
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
English Study Advisor Wanted．
The Students'Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term．The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practise their oral English，answering their questions，and helping organize activities such as singing，English evenings，or lectures on interesting topics．（高分句型一）
The applicant should be a native speaker of English．Fluency in Chinese is preferred．The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week．（高分句型二）If you are interested，please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview．（高分句型三）Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview．
Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 你校學(xué)生會(huì)需招聘一名留學(xué)生做英語學(xué)習(xí)顧問（English Study Advisor），請(qǐng)你以短文形式寫一則招聘啟事．主要內(nèi)容包括：（1）母語是英語，漢語流利者優(yōu)先；（2）解答英語學(xué)習(xí)問題，協(xié)助組織英語活動(dòng)；（3）每周 工作四小時(shí)，報(bào)酬面議；（4）聯(lián)系人：李華（Tel.13011223344）．寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩．注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右；（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，高分句型：
The Students'Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term．句中使用動(dòng)詞不定式；
The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practise their oral English，answering their questions，and helping organize activities such as singing，English evenings，or lectures on interesting topics．并列的動(dòng)名詞短語作賓語；
Fluency in Chinese is preferred．The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week．被動(dòng)語態(tài)在句中出現(xiàn)；
If you are interested，please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview．經(jīng)典使用條件句；
Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview．巧妙使用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)．

解答 English Study Advisor Wanted
       The Students'Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term．The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practise their oral English，answering their questions，and helping organize activities such as singing，English evenings，or lectures on interesting topics．（高分句型一）
       The applicant should be a native speaker of English．Fluency in Chinese is preferred．The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week．（高分句型二） If you are interested，please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview．（高分句型三）Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Students'Union

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．