Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線（___），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

On September 16, our headteacher organized an activity to climb Mount Nan to encourage participation in outdoor exercise. The majority of my classmates joined the activity. Early in the morning, having assembled outside the school gate, we head straight to the destination. We set out for the top in high spirits when the moment we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In a course of the climb, we cooperated with each other to pass the rocky and steep areas. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, which we enjoyed the bright sunshine and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, which we enjoyed the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was beautiful. Bathed in the warm sunshine, we entertained us with stories, songs, dance and games. This event was extreme beneficial, for not only did we talk a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned how to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!

Answer 1

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【解析】1.join in sth.參加某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，故在joined后面加in。

2.句子主語(yǔ)we和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞assemble集合，之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，用過去分詞做時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，故把having去掉。

3.根據(jù)上文的On September 16，可知句子用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把head---headed。

4.句意：在爬山過程中。In the course of 在---過程中，故在in后加the。

5.此處the summit做先行詞，在后面的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句中做地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)，故把which---where。

6.句意：從城市頂部觀看，城市是美麗的。The city和view之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以此處用過去分詞做時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，故把Viewing---Viewed。

7.句意：我們通過講故事、唱歌、跳舞和做游戲使我們娛樂。entertain oneself使某人自己娛樂，故把us---ourselves。

8.句意：我們通過講故事、唱歌、跳舞和做游戲使我們娛樂。根據(jù)句意可知把dance---dances。

9.副詞修飾形容詞，故把extreme--- extremely。

10.此處suggest建議，后面的賓語(yǔ)從句用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，（should）+動(dòng)詞原形，故把are---be。