【題目】請閱讀下面的文字及圖表，然后按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

【寫作內(nèi)容】

(1)用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

(2)綜合上述信息，簡要分析導(dǎo)致青少年近視的主要原因；

(3)根據(jù)你的分析，從學(xué)校規(guī)范和個(gè)人行為兩方面談?wù)勀愕玫降膯⑹?/span>(不少于兩點(diǎn)）。

【寫作要求】

(1)寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

(2)作文中不能山現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

(3)不必寫標(biāo)題。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

【答案】One possible version：

More and more young people are getting nearsighted， which can be determined by some symptoms. The ever-increasing rate of nearsightedness in almost every school throughout China has become so alarming.

For many of young people, it is their routine to be buried in their books from morning till night while others often keep their eyes fixed on the computer or TV. Their eyes are burdened so heavily that they can hardly function normally in the end. What’s worse, every year quite some students cannot go to their ideal colleges or get their dream jobs owing to their poor eyesight.

Now it is time that schools took action to protect students’ eyesight by giving them lectures ensuring proper lighting in classrooms, and limiting their time of reading books or doing exercises, eye exercises included.

As for me, I will immediately try every possible means to prevent my eyesight from getting weak.

【解析】本文屬于圖表類作文，采用了“材料類—圖形—提綱類”形式，綜合考查考生閱讀材料，識(shí)圖和寫作能力。材料分為三部分：可分三段來寫，第一段按題目要求用約30個(gè)詞簡要概括寫作材料的要點(diǎn)；第二段綜合上述信息，簡要分析導(dǎo)致青少年近視的主要原因；第三、四段根據(jù)你的分析，從學(xué)校規(guī)范和個(gè)人行為兩方面談?wù)勀愕玫降膯⑹?/span>(不少于兩點(diǎn)）。

亮點(diǎn)分析：本文第一段用30個(gè)詞概括了所給的材料，使了第一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，which can be determined by some symptoms.讓文章結(jié)構(gòu)有了層次感。在第二段分析了導(dǎo)致青少年近視的原因。在本段中運(yùn)用了while引導(dǎo)的狀語從句： For many of young people… till night while others often keep …computer or TV. 以及由so…that…引導(dǎo)的狀語從句：Their eyes are burdened so heavily that they can hardly function normally in the end.再用一個(gè)連詞“What’s worse”引出第三個(gè)原因。銜接詞的恰當(dāng)使用使該段條理清晰。第三段句型多樣，條理清晰。最后兩段從學(xué)校及個(gè)人行為兩方面對個(gè)人的啟示。在本段中運(yùn)用了由It’s time that引導(dǎo)的虛擬語氣：Now it is time that schools took action to protect students’ eyesight by giving them lectures。及非謂語 ensuring proper lighting in classrooms, and limiting their time of reading。這些句式給文章增色許多。

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