Question

【題目】假定你是李華， 暑假你參加了英國游學活動，住在房東Tricia家中， 回國后給房東寫一封信表示感謝， 要點如下：

1、安全抵家

2、回顧英國游學體會

3、感謝房東的幫助

4、附寄兩張合影

5、表達愿望

注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右。

2、可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3、結束語已為你寫好。

Dear Tricia,

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tricia,

I’ve come back home safely . Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot . I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students. More importantly , your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British cultural adapt to the life there . So I’m so grateful to you .

By the way , attached to the letter are two photos taken with you , which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together.

You are expected to come to China soon.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這篇文章屬于提綱式要點作文，要求學生就所給內容寫一封感謝信，是學生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學習應該注意實用性，生活型的原則。應注意下面幾點：1）注意人稱，應該用第一人稱的形式給房東（第二人稱）寫感謝信；2）注意時態(tài)的正確使用：從試題的內容上可以看出在表達要點1和2時應用過去時；而其他要點則需要注意時態(tài)的替換。3）注意恰當使用邏輯詞語，是各個要點間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細組織語言，合理安排結構。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開頭要開門見山。

【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：Looking back to回顧，impress，benefited a lot from doing受益匪淺，have a better understanding o更好的掌握，adapt to，be grateful to感激，By the way順便，attached to附帶，remind of，which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together是一句定語從句。