Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李耀祖，每年的9月22日是“世界無車日”，請撰寫一份主題為 “Let’s Ride Bicycles”的演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1. 目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；

2. 騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。

參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；節(jié)能（energy saving）

注意：1.詞數(shù)：100詞左右；

2.演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，該部分不計入總詞數(shù)。

3.對所給提示，不要簡單翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Good morning, everyone,

I’m Li Yaozu from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.

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That’s all! Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone,

I’m Li Yaozu from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.

As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transportation, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.

How can we solve the problem then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.

Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to built up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us. That’s all! Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：不完屬于半開放性作文，要求考生書寫的要點并沒有完全寫出，想要考生自己整理。半開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。

亮點說明：范文中高級句式的運用很出色，如as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transportation, bringing great convenience to our life.該句中還含有with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語等等，讓整個文章增色很多。