Question

【題目】假定你是李華，即將高中畢業(yè)，想申請(qǐng)就讀一所國(guó)外大學(xué)。請(qǐng)你寫一封信向該校的負(fù)責(zé)人咨詢以下信息：

1.就讀該大學(xué)的資歷和要求。

2.就讀該大學(xué)的費(fèi)用和住宿條件。

注意：

1.詞數(shù) 100 左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m a Chinese student who will graduate from a high school.

__________________________________________________________________________

Look forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm a student who will graduate from a high school. Having known about your university online. I'm writing to inquire about some information as follows:

To start with, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I've learnt English for 10 years and I can speak English fluently, but I wonder if there are any further requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting. I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation as regards accommodation?

I would appreciate it if you would be kind enough to provide me with the relevant information above. Look forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：

本文是即將畢業(yè)的高中學(xué)生，寫信給一所國(guó)外的大學(xué)負(fù)責(zé)人，咨詢，1．就讀該大學(xué)的資歷和要求。2. 就讀該大學(xué)的費(fèi)用和住宿條件。文章給出了提綱，成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

1.使用高級(jí)句型：包含定語(yǔ)從句的句子I'm a student who will graduate from a high school.；現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式做狀語(yǔ)Having known about your university online. I'm writing to inquire about some information as follows；含有賓語(yǔ)從句的句子I wonder if there are any further requirements.形式賓語(yǔ)it后接賓語(yǔ)從句的句子I would appreciate it if you would be kind enough to provide me with the relevant information above.2.使用了過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)：To start with，Second，Third等。3.使用了重要短語(yǔ)：as follows列舉如下；look forward to期待。