Question

【題目】寫作二（滿分20分）

假如你是高中三年級的學(xué)生李華，你在學(xué)校組織了一項“有煩惱向誰說”的調(diào)查活動。

請用英語給校報編輯寫一封信，反映相關(guān)情況。內(nèi)容包括：調(diào)查結(jié)果（如下圖所示）、持相應(yīng)想法的理由及你對調(diào)查結(jié)果的看法。

注意：1．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計人總詞數(shù)

2．詞數(shù)為80左右。

Dear Editor,

I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey---"To whom do you go when in trouble?" The results are as follows.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey---“To whom do you go when in trouble?” The results are as follows.

61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have troubles, the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other. Another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to. They suggest that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experience. Nevertheless, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all. They say that their troubles are none of others’ business. They find it hard to get along with others.

It is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a survey example. However, some general comments can be made. It seems clear from the response that some students lack communication with others and teachers and parents need to play a more important role in their lives.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇給調(diào)查報告的作文，也是提綱類作文，主要內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，就是讓我們有煩惱都向誰來訴說。給材料作文的寫作首先要做到的就是不遺漏要點(diǎn)，如是反映要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容。范文中提到一些很不錯的短語have a better understanding of對。。有更好的理解； play a more important role in在。。起重要作用；61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have troubles, the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other.在這個句子the reason of which引導(dǎo)定語從句；It is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a survey example.這個句子it做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式；