Question

【題目】假如你是一名大學(xué)一年級新生叫李華，對近年來大學(xué)畢業(yè)生就業(yè)情況頗有已見，請根據(jù)下面提供的信息向報社寫信談?wù)勀愕目捶�，其中包括以下要點：

1. 學(xué)生心態(tài)向往城市，不愿下鄉(xiāng)；

2. 就業(yè)現(xiàn)狀城市人才過剩，農(nóng)村渴求人才；

3. 就業(yè)前景農(nóng)村天地廣闊，可施展才華。

參考詞匯：大學(xué)一年級新生 freshman n.就業(yè) occupation n.

注意：1. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出；

2. 必須包括以上要點，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 詞數(shù)100左右，不包括開頭、結(jié)尾。

Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about college graduates’ occupations.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about college graduates’ occupations. Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.

As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us. Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.

Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。文章主要對近年來大學(xué)畢業(yè)生就業(yè)情況，說說自己的看法。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

要求：1. 表明寫信目的

2. 表達(dá)自己的看法

1). 學(xué)生心態(tài)向往城市，不愿下鄉(xiāng)；

2). 就業(yè)現(xiàn)狀城市人才過剩，農(nóng)村渴求人才；

3). 就業(yè)前景農(nóng)村天地廣闊，可施展才華。

3. 表達(dá)祝愿

第二步：列提綱（重點詞組）

college graduates’occupations; look forward to; be willing to; in the countryside; as a matter of fact; talented people; put your abilities to good use; make greater contributions to; therefore

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am writing to you to talk about college graduates’ occupations.

2. Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.

3. As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us.

4. Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.

5. Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第四步：潤色修改