Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你的朋友林濤面對全新的高中學(xué)習(xí)感到有些迷茫和無所適從，希望你給他一些學(xué)習(xí)方法方面的指導(dǎo)和建議。請結(jié)合以下要點(diǎn)，給他寫一封電子郵件：

1．制定生活學(xué)習(xí)計劃，合理安排時間；

2．課前預(yù)習(xí)，課上認(rèn)真聽講、做筆記，課后復(fù)習(xí)；

3．勞逸結(jié)合。

注意：1、詞數(shù)100字左右（開頭己給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）；

2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：preview預(yù)習(xí)

Dear Lin Tao,

I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble with your schoolwork. _______

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Lin Tao,

I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble with your schoolwork. I’d like to give you some tips to help you deal with the problem.

First, you should make a schedule about your life and study, which can help you organize your time well and do everything in perfect order.

Secondly, you should preview the new lessons before class and review what you have learned after class. In class, you should listen to the teacher carefully and try to make notes.

Thirdly, don’t forget to combine study with pleasure. Try to relax yourself by listening to music or doing sports whenever you can. As you know, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)已給出，寫作時可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運(yùn)用高級句子。賓語從句的使用：I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble with your schoolwork.非限制性定語從句的使用：you should make a schedule about your life and study, which can help you organize your time well and do everything in perfect order.時間狀語從句的使用：Try to relax yourself by listening to music or doing sports whenever you can.連接詞的恰當(dāng)使用使文章結(jié)構(gòu)層次清楚：Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly。