Question

1．假設你是李華，你校英文報舉辦有關(guān)因特網(wǎng)的征文活動，請根據(jù)下列要求，寫一篇短文，提出你對如何使用因特網(wǎng)的看法．
要求：
1．合理使用（看新聞、交際、查信息；限制時間）；
2．避免的事情（玩游戲、浪費時間、影響學習）．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Nowadays the Internet brings great convenience to us．We should make the most of it and use it wisely．We can be aware of what happens both at home and abroad through the Internet．（高分句型一）We can also communicate with others，using the Internet．In our studies，we can obtain almost all the information from it．But remember：we should limit our time to use the Internet．
Everything has two sides．It is obvious that the Internet has several disadvantages，which can cause serious problems．（高分句型二）Therefore，we mustn't devote too much time to playing online games，only to waste our precious time and affect our studies!（高分句型三）All in all，we had better make use of the Internet wisely and make it help us．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設你是李華，你校英文報舉辦有關(guān)因特網(wǎng)的征文活動，請根據(jù)下列要求，寫一篇短文，提出你對如何使用因特網(wǎng)的看法，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：合理使用（看新聞、交際、查信息；限制時間）；避免的事情（玩游戲、浪費時間、影響學習）．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：make the most of 充分利用；be aware of 意識到；at home and abroad在國內(nèi)外；First of all首先；devote to致力于；
We can be aware of what happens both at home and abroad through the Internet．（高分句型一）
It is obvious that the Internet has several disadvantages，which can cause serious problems．（高分句型二）Therefore，we mustn't devote too much time to playing online games，only to waste our precious time and affect our studies!（高分句型三）

解答 Nowadays the Internet brings great convenience to us．We should make the most of it and use it wisely．We can be aware of what happens both at home and abroad through the Internet．（高分句型一）We can also communicate with others，using the Internet．In our studies，we can obtain almost all the information from it．But remember：we should limit our time to use the Internet．
       Everything has two sides．It is obvious that the Internet has several disadvantages，which can cause serious problems．（高分句型二）Therefore，we mustn't devote too much time to playing online games，only to waste our precious time and affect our studies!（高分句型三）All in all，we had better make use of the Internet wisely and make it help us．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．