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11．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華．你的英國筆友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他很想了解你上次外出旅行的情況，請(qǐng)你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：1．旅行目的地及時(shí)間；2．選擇該地點(diǎn)的原因；3．旅行中的收獲．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jim，
It is great to hear from you．I'm writing to share my last travel experience with you．
After discussing where to go during the May Day break，my parents and I went to Xi'an．We chose Xi'an for the followingreasons．（高分句型一）As is known to all，serving as the capital city of 13 dynasties，Xi'anis often calledthe birthplace of Chinese civilization．（高分句型二）Both my parents and I are interested in Chinese history，so the historical sites in Xi'an like the Terra Cotta Warriors and the ancient city walls were at the top of my family's travel list．Also，I'm doing a project about the Silk Road．The visit to Xi'an certainly benefited my research and deepened my understanding about the importance of the trade routes．
During our stay in Xi'an，not only did I appreciate the city's long history and rich culture，but visiting Xi'an made me feel very proud to be Chinese．（高分句型三）
How about your last travel？Looking forward to your reply．
Best wishes，Yours，LiHua

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華．你的英國筆友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他很想了解你上次外出旅行的情況，請(qǐng)你給Jim回信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：旅行目的地及時(shí)間；選擇該地點(diǎn)的原因；旅行中的收獲． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：hear from收到某人的信息；As is known to all眾所周知；serve as 充當(dāng)，擔(dān)任；be interested in對(duì)…感興趣；not only，but （also）不僅，而且；Look forward to盼望；
After discussing where to go during the May Day break，my parents and I went to Xi'an．We chose Xi'an for the following reasons．（高分句型一）
As is known to all，serving as the capital city of 13 dynasties，Xi'an is often called the birthplace of Chinese civilization．（高分句型二）
During our stay in Xi'an，not only did I appreciate the city's long history and rich culture，but visiting Xi'an made me feel very proud to be Chinese．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jim，
      It is great to hear from you．I'm writing to share my last travel experience with you．
      After discussing where to go during the May Day break，my parents and I went to Xi'an．We chose Xi'an for the following reasons．（高分句型一）As is known to all，serving as the capital city of 13 dynasties，Xi'an is often called the birthplace of Chinese civilization．（高分句型二）Both my parents and I are interested in Chinese history，so the historical sites in Xi'an like the Terra Cotta Warriors and the ancient city walls were at the top of my family's travel list．Also，I'm doing a project about the Silk Road．The visit to Xi'an certainly benefited my research and deepened my understanding about the importance of the trade routes．
      During our stay in Xi'an，not only did I appreciate the city's long history and rich culture，but visiting Xi'an made me feel very proud to be Chinese．（高分句型三）
      How about your last travel？Looking forward to your reply．
      Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．