Question

【題目】如何衡量一個(gè)人真正的品質(zhì)，不同的人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語，結(jié)合圖片所提示的信息，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。

“The measure of a man’s real character is what he would do if he knew he would never be found out.”

— Thomas Macaulay

內(nèi)容要求：

1.你對(duì)該引語的理解；2.舉例說明；3.恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。

注意：

1.內(nèi)容至少包括一幅圖片信息；

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；

3.詞數(shù)：120左右；短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：self-discipline n.自律；self-disciplined adj.自律的

This quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us that

Answer 1

【答案】

This quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us that it is self-discipline that reflects a man’s real character. Therefore, we should be self-disciplined anytime even if we know that our behavior will never be found out.

For example, when taking exams, we should be self-disciplined enough and not cheat. For another, it is essential for us to learn to control ourselves well on the Internet. We can’t be addicted to computer games or bad information, nor can we use the Internet to attack others immorally and illegally. In addition, through self-discipline we should avoid and resist different kinds of temptations, which is of great help to prevent corruptions.

In conclusion, being self-disciplined not only helps us improve ourselves, but contributes to building up a harmonious and civilized society. As the saying goes, the day has eyes and the night has ears. We should make a reasonable choice about what to do wherever and whenever we are.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于議論文，本篇書面表達(dá)屬于議論文，根據(jù)提示信息和要求來寫作。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、要依據(jù)提示信息或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。行文時(shí)注意要明確表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。在描述現(xiàn)象和舉例子時(shí)要有層次感，不能給人留下雜亂無章的感覺。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如Therefore, we should be self-disciplined anytime even if we know that our behavior will never be found out.是讓步狀語從句；In addition, through self-discipline we should avoid and resist different kinds of temptations, which is of great help to prevent corruptions. 是非限制性定語從句，還有賓語從句We should make a reasonable choice about what to do wherever and whenever we are.等此外，文章還使用了大量短語For another, it is essential for sb to, be addicted to, In addition，is of great help，build up，As the saying goes，make a reasonable choice about等。插入語For another ，In addition ，In conclusion等的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。