Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面材枓，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章。

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1. 用約 30 個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 用約 120 個(gè)單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：

（1） 支持成反對(duì)共享單車的推廣；

（2） 用 2-3 個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的觀點(diǎn)。

（寫作要求）

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇還貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Possible version one

The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country, with more companies springing up in the market. The service not only brings great convenience to people, but causes some problems as well.

From my standpoint, bike-sharing system has become an essential part of public transportation in cities and should be actively promoted. Firstly, with an increasing number of people choosing the service to get around, the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically, which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams. Furthermore, this service also benefits individuals in various ways. For example, it provides locals and tourists with a convenient, cheap and healthy means of transport. Those who would otherwise use their own bicycles don’t need to be concerned about such problems as theft, storage and maintenance.

In a word, bike sharing is an innovative service, which relieves urban traffic pressure and brings citizens enormous benefits. And more shared bikes should be launched into the market. (163 words)

Possible version two

The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country, with more companies springing up in the market. The service not only brings great convenience to people, but causes some problems as well.

In my opinion, bike-sharing should not be promoted at present for the following reasons. In order to attract more subscribers, the bike-sharing companies are flooding walkways and other public spaces with hundreds of bikes in the hope of promoting their services, which brings great inconvenience to pedestrians. Furthermore, for lack of relevant regulations, some uncivilized people deliberately damage shared-bikes, for example, by throwing them into rivers or piling them up randomly. A fairly high deposit fee has also been criticized in a country familiar with accessing inexpensive public services.

In conclusion, bike-sharing system shouldn’t be promoted before regulations and policies are put in place. The government, companies and users should all play their role in making bike-sharing sustainable and enjoyable. (156 words)

【解析】

這是一篇任務(wù)型寫作。1. 用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；2. 用約 120 個(gè)單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。

本文是一篇任務(wù)型寫作。共分兩個(gè)任務(wù)：第一個(gè)任務(wù)要求用約30個(gè)詞概述所給信息的主要內(nèi)容；第二個(gè)任務(wù)用約 120 個(gè)單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：（1） 支持成反對(duì)共享單車的推廣；（2） 用 2-3 個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的觀點(diǎn)。第二部分給出了寫作提綱，兩大要點(diǎn)是中心。注意完成第一任務(wù)時(shí)，語言使用應(yīng)簡練、準(zhǔn)確、到位。在第二個(gè)任務(wù)中，應(yīng)涵蓋題目所列出的兩大要點(diǎn)。本文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫作過程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性。