Question

【題目】假如你是中學生李華，你校外教Mary女士近期準備回英國度假，為此，你班同學準備開一個晚會為她送行。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一封邀請信。

對她的教學表示感謝。

時間：本周日晚上7：30開始，預計持續(xù)1個小時。

地點：高三10班教室

活動：唱英文歌，送鮮花等

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3. 可適當發(fā)揮，使行文連貫。

Dear Mary,

We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon.

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mary,

We heard that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon. Firstly, I’d like to express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school. Therefore, we’ve decided to have a farewell party this Sunday for you. The party will start at 7:30 on Sunday evening in the classroom of Class 10, Grade 3 and will probably last about an hour. All of the class hope that you can come to join us to have a good time together. We will sing some English songs to give you good wishes. Besides that, we are going to send you some flowers as a gift.

We are all expecting your coming.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：

假如你是中學生李華，你校外教Mary女士近期準備回英國度假，為此，你班同學準備開一個晚會為她送行。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一封邀請信。對她的教學表示感謝。時間：本周日晚上7：30開始，預計持續(xù)1個小時。地點：高三10班教室活動：唱英文歌，送鮮花等。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 可適當發(fā)揮，使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

文章語言簡練，條理清晰。Firstly, I’d like to express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school.句中運用了動詞不定式結構；Therefore, we’ve decided to have a farewell party this Sunday for you. 句中使用了現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)和動詞不定式；All of the class hope that you can come to join us to have a good time together.賓語從句在句中出現(xiàn)；We are all expecting your coming.文章在最后使用了現(xiàn)在進行時態(tài)；另外，句中還使用了Therefore、Besides這樣的副詞。