Question

9．假如你叫李華，是青島市某中學(xué)學(xué)生．最近你校在為一批來自加拿大的學(xué)生征詢寄宿家庭，你有意申請．請根據(jù)提供的信息和自身條件用英語給加拿大Montreal 中學(xué)校長寫封信，說明你申請的理由（如住房條件，語言優(yōu)勢，接待經(jīng)驗等）．
注意：
1．文章必須包括所有要點；
2．詞數(shù)120-150，信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the Canadian students．
We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English，so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers．My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car．Last month we received two American students．We had a great time．Besides，my mother cooks well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時不僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．
亮點句型一：We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．我們有一個又大又干凈的房子，坐落在城市的一個美麗的地區(qū)．這是一個非限制性定語從句，which指代前文中的先行詞house．
亮點句型二：I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．如果能有機會和他們交朋友，我將不勝感激．I would appreciate it if 其后要用虛擬語氣．

解答 Dear sir，
       I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the Canadian students．
       We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．（亮點句型一）I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English，so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers．My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car．Last month we received two American students．We had a great time．Besides，my mother cooks well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．（亮點句型二）
      Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 考查開放性作文寫作，開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示．給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大．對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力．在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．