Question

10．請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文．
You cannot change the weather，but you can change your mood．
注意：
①無須寫標(biāo)題；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的一個事例；
④文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
⑤詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語不計入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 本文為半開放性寫作．所給句子意思為，你不能改變天氣，但是你可以改變自己的心情．講述了一種樂觀的生活態(tài)度．需要讀者寫作關(guān)于樂觀處事的事例內(nèi)容，注意是在生活中的事例，列舉名人事例是不恰當(dāng)?shù)模�且事例是發(fā)生過的，敘述時應(yīng)當(dāng)使用過去時．
重要短語：
depends on，取決于，be full of 充滿，laugh at　sb．，嘲笑某人
高分句子：
1．Although the songs of birds were very nice and the flowers were very beautiful，they could not let me escape from depression．本句中Although引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句，意為盡管．
2．It was not long before I made great progress in my Chinese．本句中含有重要句型，It was not long before，不久后．

解答 The weather depends on the sky，but whether you are happy or not depends on yourself．（點明主旨）
　  I can well remember that I didn't pass the Chinese exam several times last year，so the weather of my sky seemed to be full of clouds．（舉出事例）Although the songs of birds were very nice and the flowers were very beautiful，they could not let me escape from depression．（高分句型）What's more，I felt that I was laughed at by all the other classmates．My Chinese teacher noticed my subtle difference，so she gave me some advice and told me to change my attitude．With the help of her，I tried to face the trouble with a positive attitude．To my surprise，everything changed．It was not long before I made great progress in my Chinese．（高分句型）
　　Life is full of difficulties．Sometimes you may not be able to decide the situation you are in，but you can change your attitude．（總結(jié)文章）

點評 對于開放式作文，考生寫作時，可以選取能運用熟悉的英語詞匯、句型的點進行展開，對于沒有把握的地方，要靈活變通；要盡量運用多樣化的句式，注意長短句的結(jié)合、簡單句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)合；要注意上下文的銜接，過渡要自然．