Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面內(nèi)容，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。

P= professor; S=students (In a philosophy class)

P: We all have this one life to live. A fleeting shadow amongst all that exists in this vast universe. We have the ability to accomplish anything, truly anything, if we use our time wisely.

P: (putting some golf balls into the jar) Is this jar full?

S: Yes.

P: (after add some pebbles into the jar) Is it full now?

S: Yes.

P: (after inserting some sand into the jar) How about now, is the jar full now?

S: Yes.

P: Good… (pouring some beer into the jar)

S: … (laughing, smiling, thinking, …)

P: Now I want you to recognize that this jar represents your life. The golf balls are the important things, your family, your friends, your health and your passions. The pebbles are the other important things, your car, your job, your home. The sand is everything else, the small stuff.

P: Now if you put the sand in the jar first you won’t have room for the pebbles or the golf balls. The same is true in life. If you spend all your energy and your time on the small stuff, you won’t have time for all the really important things that matter to you.

P: Pay attention to the things that are critical to your happiness. Take care of the golf balls first. The really important things. Set your priorities. Because everything else is just sand.

S: Professor, what does the beer represent?

P: I’m glad you asked. It goes to show that no matter how full your life may seem to be, there is always room for a couple of beers with a friend.

1. 用約30個(gè)詞概括上述文中的內(nèi)容；

2. 談?wù)勀銓?duì)文中教授觀點(diǎn)的看法，用適當(dāng)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

3. 就文中所述哲理，談?wù)勗趯W(xué)習(xí)中該怎樣踐行教授的觀點(diǎn)（或你的觀點(diǎn)）。

（寫(xiě)作要求）

1. 寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；

（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）：內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】A philosophy professor shares with his students the significance of a wise use of time. With a unique demonstration, he inspires them to prioritize the most important things over small stuff.

Personally, I do believe the professor reveals the true nature of life. We only have 24 hours a day, so it's unrealistic to include everything precious in our life. A wise sequence is therefore crucial to our wellbeing. Just as is shown in the demonstration, when life is stuffed with small things, big and meaningful ones will remain unfulfilled.

This principle can actually be followed in our study. For example, to efficiently acquire some knowledge, a global image of it should come first before we dive into small details Our study time should also be wisely allocated, addressing those important or difficult subject rather than small ones first. Never forget, being penny-wise but pound-foolish is never a good strategy in study.

【解析】

這是一篇議論文。談?wù)剬?duì)文中教授觀點(diǎn)的看法，談?wù)勗趯W(xué)習(xí)中該怎樣踐行教授的觀點(diǎn)。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過(guò)審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。第一，1. 用約30個(gè)詞概括上述文中的內(nèi)容；

2. 談?wù)勀銓?duì)文中教授觀點(diǎn)的看法，用適當(dāng)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

3. 就文中所述哲理，談?wù)勗趯W(xué)習(xí)中該怎樣踐行教授的觀點(diǎn)（或你的觀點(diǎn)）

第二，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)。第三，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫(xiě)作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段， 用約30個(gè)詞概括上述文中的內(nèi)容。第二段，談?wù)勀銓?duì)文中教授觀點(diǎn)的看法，用適當(dāng)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。第三段，就文中所述哲理，談?wù)勗趯W(xué)習(xí)中該怎樣踐行教授的觀點(diǎn)（或你的觀點(diǎn)）。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語(yǔ):demonstration, prioritize, wellbeing, unfulfilled, share with，inspire them to do sth, reveals the true nature of life, be crucial to, be stuffed with, dive into.

第四步：確定較為高級(jí)的句子:before 引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句For example, to efficiently acquire some knowledge, a global image of it should come first before we dive into small details. 省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句Personally, I do believe the professor reveals the true nature of life.

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過(guò)渡銜接:Personally, For example, Finally.

第六步：注意書(shū)寫(xiě)，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。