Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Today is Sunday, I didn't get up early as usually. In the morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited him to see a film. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema at 3:00 p.m. we found all the tickets had sold out. Then we went back to school and played the football. After this, while we were about to go home , we saw our English teacher, Mr. Wang, coming into the school gate. He told us we have made great progress in English this term . He also suggested that we should read more and wrote more. We promised him that we would follow his advices.

 

Answer 1

1.usually---usual

2.do→did

3.classmate ---classmates

4.And ---But

5..had∧ been

6.the 去掉

7..while改when

8.have---had

9.wrote---write

10.advices—advice

【解析】

試題分析：今天是周日，我做完作業(yè)后，約同學(xué)去看電影。然而當(dāng)我們到電影院的時(shí)候電影票已經(jīng)賣完了，于是我們?nèi)�學(xué)校踢足球。這時(shí)我們碰到了英語老師，老師說我們英語取得了很大的進(jìn)步，而且鼓勵(lì)我們要更加努力地學(xué)習(xí)。

1.小題1】usually---usual考查形容詞。I didn't get up early as usually.固定短語：as usual“像往常一樣”，把usually改為usual。

2.do→did 考查動(dòng)詞過去式。I do some washing.根據(jù)上文可知文章是講述過去的事情，故把do改為did。

3.classmate ---classmates 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。One of 后面跟復(fù)數(shù)名詞，把classmate改為classmates。

4.And ---But 考查連詞。And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema at 3:00 p.m. 根據(jù)上下文內(nèi)容可知此處是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，把And改為But。

5..had后加 been 考查謂語動(dòng)詞。we found all the tickets had sold out. 由句意判斷ticket和銷售是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用過去完成時(shí)的被動(dòng)形式，故在had后加been。

6.the 去掉 考查冠詞。Then we went back to school and played the football. 固定短語：play football“踢足球”，在球類前面沒有冠詞，故去掉the。

7..while改when 考查連詞。After this, while we were about to go home , while后面句子的謂語動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該是延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞，故把while改為when。

8.have---had 考查謂語動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。He told us we have made great progress in English。主句是過去時(shí)，后面的賓語從句應(yīng)該用過去時(shí)的適當(dāng)形式，所以把have改為had。

9.wrote---write 考查謂語動(dòng)詞形式。. He also suggested that we should read more and wrote more. 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should后面應(yīng)該跟動(dòng)詞原形，把wrote改為write。

10.advices—advice 考查名詞。We promised him that we would follow his advices. Advice是不可數(shù)名詞，故把a(bǔ)dvices改為advice。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。