Question

15．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示要點(diǎn)，以"The Ways to Keep Healthy"為題，寫一篇短文．
提示：
1．人人都想保持健康．
2．飲食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因?yàn)樗鼈兏缓�纖維素和維生素；少吃黃油、奶酪、咖啡和巧克力，因?yàn)樗鼈兒�糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速變胖�?br />3．有良好的生活習(xí)慣：定期鍛煉，充足的睡眠，不要過(guò)度勞累，不抽煙等等．
要求：
1．短文須包括上述所有要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使短文連貫．
2．詞數(shù)約100左右．
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Everyone hopes to be in good health．But how？Here are some ways to keep healthy．
First，you need a healthy diet．It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins．Don't eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat，like butter，cheese，coffee and chocolate．（高分句型一）Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily．
Second，good living habits are very important．You should do regular exercise to build up your body．Besides，enough rest is necessary for your health．（高分句型二）You need 8 hours'sleep a night and don't work too hard．Smoking is a bad habit，so never smoke．
In a word，healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示要點(diǎn)，以"The Ways to Keep Healthy"為題，寫一篇短文，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：人人都想保持健康．飲食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因?yàn)樗鼈兏缓�纖維素和維生素；少吃黃油、奶酪、咖啡和巧克力，因?yàn)樗鼈兒�糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速變胖．有良好的生活�?xí)慣：定期鍛煉，充足的睡眠，不要過(guò)度勞累，不抽煙等等   2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：keep healthy保持健康；  First首先；Second其次；put on weight 增肥；build up your body強(qiáng)身健體；Besides另外；In a word總之，一句話；
Don't eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat，like butter，cheese，coffee and chocolate．（高分句型一）
Besides，enough rest is necessary for your health．（高分句型二）
 In a word，healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy．（高分句型三）

解答 The Ways to Keep Healthy
       Everyone hopes to be in good health．But how？Here are some ways to keep healthy．
       First，you need a healthy diet．It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins．Don't eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat，like butter，cheese，coffee and chocolate．（高分句型一）Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily．
      Second，good living habits are very important．You should do regular exercise to build up your body．Besides，enough rest is necessary for your health．（高分句型二）You need 8 hours'sleep a night and don't work too hard．Smoking is a bad habit，so never smoke．
       In a word，healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy．（高分句型三）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．