Question

假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)∧，并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.

I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do

homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 holding--hold

 passes---passed

 much----well/clearly

 shoulder---shoulders

 toward---to

 himself---him

 he前加and

 去掉a

 during---when

 never---ever

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇記敘文。文章講述了我對(duì)爺爺、奶奶的回憶。

 holding—hold  此處used to意為：過(guò)去常常的意思，后加不定式

 passes---passed根據(jù)前文的was可知，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)passed

 much----well/clearly根據(jù)文意可知，我清楚地記得爺爺。故用well或clearly

 shoulder---shoulders考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，此處指人的肩膀，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式

 toward---to考查動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，turn  to所以將toward改為to

 himself---him考查代詞的用法。這里指：使他和其他人分開(kāi)

 he前加and考查并列連詞的用法。兩個(gè)分句用并列連詞連接

 去掉a考查固定短語(yǔ)的用法。此處事實(shí)上是in fact，故去掉a

 during---when考查狀語(yǔ)從句的連接詞。根據(jù)句意為，當(dāng)他們過(guò)來(lái)和我玩或做作業(yè)的時(shí)候，故用when

 never---ever考查語(yǔ)意錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)句意：他是我認(rèn)識(shí)的最和藹的人�？芍�用ever曾經(jīng)。

考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生的對(duì)基本語(yǔ)法及句法知識(shí)的糾錯(cuò)能力。