Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

The sentence from our teachers tell us that we shouldn't be discouraged after failures.Definitely we should keep trying with determine.Success lies in the ability to continue efforts despite failures.

At the age of twelve,I get a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.Besides,it was harder than expecting.The bike seemed too heavy for me to control and I fell off the bike over and over again.I was about to give up while my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice,I found me doing better and better.Looking back,I feel I would not be able to ride bike if I had lost my heart.

Honest speaking,we can't avoid failing.What matters most is that we should stick to it.

Answer 1

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【解析】（1）考查動詞，句子講究主謂一致，句子主語為The sentence，為單數(shù)，故謂語應(yīng)該用三單，故改為tells。

（2）考查名詞，with為介詞，常用搭配為介賓短語，故此處應(yīng)該用名詞，故改為determination.

（3）考查時態(tài)，時間為At the age of twelve意思是在我12歲時，時間是過去，所以應(yīng)該用過去時，故改為got。

（4）考查連詞，I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.Besides,it was harder than expecting.意思是我想親自試試，然而，他比想象中的難。兩個句子之間構(gòu)成轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故改為however。

（5）考查動詞，I expected to do something 意思是我想要干某事，故此處改為expected。

（6）考查連詞，while指的是段時間，when指的是點時間，此處是指爸爸鼓勵我的那一刻，為點時間，故改為when。

（7）考查反身代詞，I found me doing better and better意思是我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己可以做的很好，表示自己故改為myself。

（8）考查名詞，ride a bike 意思是是騎自行車，故添加a。

（9）考查固定短語，lost heart意思是粗心，故去掉my.

（10）考查副詞，修飾動詞用副詞，此處修飾speaking，故改為Honestly。