Question

4．假定你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李津，你和幾位同學(xué)成立了一個英語俱樂部，開展了為期兩個月的活動．現(xiàn)在，你將代表俱樂部在課堂上進行經(jīng)驗交流，請寫一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容如下：
（1）簡要描述俱樂部開展的相關(guān)活動（如觀看英文電影、閱讀英文經(jīng)典等方面）；
（2）談?wù)勀銈冮_展該活動的收獲和感想；
（3）表達(dá)期望．
注意：
（1）短文詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
（3）不能出現(xiàn)本人真實信息；
（4）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear friends，
How time flies!
Dear friends，
How time flies!It is more than two months since our English Club was set up by several classmates and me．On behalf of my classmates，I'd like to talk a bout something about our club．（開頭介紹自己，以及發(fā)言的緣由）
So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning，such as watching English films，reading classic English novels，holding a Christmas party and so on．Every member took an active part in the activities．（例舉舉辦的活動） Many members said the activities benefited them a lot．Not only did they improve their English，but also they brought them much fun．Personally，I think it is really a good idea to set up the club．（活動的收獲與感想）
It is hoped that our club is growing stronger and more mature．And welcome more classmates to the club．（對于俱樂部未來的展望）
That's all．
Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇材料作文，要求代表英語俱樂部進行經(jīng)驗分享．提示較為充分，審題較為容易．根據(jù)題目提示可，需用到第一人稱及第三人稱，時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時、現(xiàn)在完成時與一般將來時等并用．內(nèi)容要點包括：1）介紹自己；2）俱樂部的基本情況及開展的活動；2）開展活動的收獲及感想；4）表達(dá)期望．我們可以將文章分為三部分：第一部分介紹自己和俱樂部；第二部分介紹俱樂部的活動及收獲、感想；第三部分表達(dá)期望．
重要的短語和句型：
How time flies!時光如梭！
set up 創(chuàng)建；設(shè)立
on behalf of 代表
a variety of 多種多樣的
and so on 等等
Every member took an active part in the activities．每個學(xué)生都積極參加活動．
Not only did they improve their English，but also they brought them much fun．他們不僅提高了英語，而且這些活動也給他們帶來了很多樂趣．
It is hoped that…大家希望…

解答 Dear friends，
       How time flies!It is more than two months since our English Club was set up by several classmates and me．On behalf of my classmates，I'd like to talk about something about our club．（開頭介紹自己，以及發(fā)言的緣由）
       So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning，such as watching English films，reading classic English novels，holding a Christmas party and so on．Every member took an active part in the activities．（例舉舉辦的活動） Many members said the activities benefited them a lot．Not only did they improve their English，but also they brought them much fun．Personally，I think it is really a good idea to set up the club．（活動的收獲與感想）
      It is hoped that our club is growing stronger and more mature．And welcome  more classmates to the club．（對于俱樂部未來的展望）
      That's all．
      Thank you．（結(jié)束語）

點評 寫材料作文時一定要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)材料提示明確此篇文章的寫作目的，再根據(jù)寫作的要點提示將文章內(nèi)容進行分段落、分層次，使文章條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)明朗．另外在寫作的時候一定要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確與間接，千萬不可為了湊字?jǐn)?shù)而表達(dá)繁瑣冗長；而且要根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)運用相關(guān)的短語與句型，讓文章的表達(dá)更加豐富．