Question

12．假設(shè)你是李華，你認(rèn)為我們周圍的環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重．作為一名中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，從我們身邊的小事做起，做一個(gè)"低碳生活"的中學(xué)生．請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一封信，建議并號召全校同學(xué)過"低碳生活"．
1．陳述理由：為什么要過"低碳生活"？
2．如何過"低碳生活"？提出至少三條建議．
3．號召更多的同學(xué)加入到"低碳生活"中來．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
提示：低碳 low-carbon
Dear fellow students，
Today，the problem of environment has been more and more serious．As living a low-carbon life is a good way to reduce emissions of greenhouse gases，I am writing to suggest that we might as well protect the environment in the following ways．（高分句型一）
To begin with，I shall only turn on the lights when necessary and keep the refrigerator and air conditioners working in the low-carbon mode to save energy．（高分句型二）Additionally，the bus or bicycle will be my first choice．Last but not least，not only will I limit the use of plastic bags when I am shopping，but also I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste whenever it is possible．（高分句型三）
I hope that more and more schoolmates will participate in the activity．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇建議信類的作文．作文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，考生在寫這篇作文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1．通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．2．給出的要點(diǎn)要齊全，但不能只是進(jìn)行簡單的羅列，要增加細(xì)節(jié)，使全文連貫自然．3．在寫建議時(shí)要逐條寫，切忌亂寫一通．
【范文亮點(diǎn)】：
文章使用"to begin with 首先""additionally 另外""last but not least最后但并不是最不重要的"等連接詞，使行文更加流暢．文章采用了I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste whenever it is possible．
"I am writing to 我寫信是為了…""not only…but also…不但…而且…""the problem of…的問題"等高分句式．
3．I shall only turn on the lights when necessary and keep the refrigerator and air conditioners working in the low-carbon mode to save energy．when 引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句省略形式．  I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste whenever it is possible．Whenever引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
As living a low-carbon life is a good way to reduce emissions of greenhouse gases，I am writing to suggest that we might as well protect the environment in the following ways．（高分句型一）
 To begin with，I shall only turn on the lights when necessary and keep the refrigerator and air conditioners working in the low-carbon mode to save energy．（高分句型二）
Last but not least，not only will I limit the use of plastic bags when I am shopping，but also I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste whenever it is possible．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear fellow students，
      Today，the problem of environment has been more and more serious．As living a low-carbon life is a good way to reduce emissions of greenhouse gases，I am writing to suggest that we might as well protect the environment in the following ways．（高分句型一）
      To begin with，I shall only turn on the lights when necessary and keep the refrigerator and air conditioners working in the low-carbon mode to save energy．（高分句型二）Additionally，the bus or bicycle will be my first choice．Last but not least，not only will I limit the use of plastic bags when I am shopping，but also I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste whenever it is possible．（高分句型三）
       I hope that more and more schoolmates will participate in the activity．
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．