Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)老師Miss Morgan要求你們明天下午去聽(tīng)一個(gè)美國(guó)歷史的講座。你因故不能參加。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一封短信向Miss Morgan請(qǐng)假。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
*表示歉意  
*理由：去機(jī)場(chǎng)接人  
*詢(xún)問(wèn)：是否有錄音，以便補(bǔ)聽(tīng)講座
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)：100左右  
2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
Dear Miss Morgan,
I am so sorry                                                                                 
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                   
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Miss Morgan,
I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.
I am very much interested in American society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)。第一步：審題。分析題目和提綱可知，這封書(shū)信的體裁應(yīng)該是議論文。論點(diǎn)是“家長(zhǎng)用金錢(qián)，旅游等承諾鼓勵(lì)孩子努力學(xué)習(xí)是不確當(dāng)?shù)摹保�陳述要點(diǎn)并說(shuō)明理由。因文章需要發(fā)表自己的意見(jiàn)，故使用第一人稱(chēng)。第二步：構(gòu)思。文章應(yīng)該按照“總——分——總”的結(jié)構(gòu)分為三段�？忌�在寫(xiě)作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)。不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如so … that …，be able to， attend the lecture，promise to do, be interested in，if so，a great deal；還運(yùn)用句型if、what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。并注意了句子的銜接如：and，if so等等。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)