Question

【題目】建議信

假定你是李華，你的外國筆友Ann最近因為父母工作的關(guān)系轉(zhuǎn)到了新的班級，她在與朋友相處方面遇到了一些問題，因此向你尋求交到好朋友且維持友誼的方法。你的建議內(nèi)容如下：

1.學(xué)會傾聽

2.有分歧時讓步

3.多陪伴

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右

2.開頭及結(jié)尾為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：compromise 讓步

Dear Ann,

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Sincerely yours,

Lihua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Ann,

I am delighted to have received your letter. In your last letter you mentioned that you had some problems in making and maintaining new friends in a new class.

From where I am standing, I suggest that one important thing to remember when trying to get along with other is to listen. When someone is talking to you, look at them. Above all, dont interrupt them. Another thing I want to remind you is that you should compromise, when you don’t agree with each other, one or both of you should agree to give up something to find a solution .Last but not least you should keep in mind that it takes time and energy to build new and good re lationship. You cannot &pect to become friends with someone if you dont spend time with them.

I sincerely hope that what I have suggested can be helpful for Iyou. am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用類作文，要求寫一封建議信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假定你是李華，你的外國筆友Ann最近因為父母工作的關(guān)系轉(zhuǎn)到了新的班級，她在與朋友相處方面遇到了一些問題，因此向你尋求交到好朋友且維持友誼的方法。人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如delighted高興的，maintain維持，get along with與…相處，look at看，Above all首先，interrupt打斷，compromise妥協(xié)，agree with同意，give up放棄，Last but not least最后但并不是最不重要的，keep in mind記住。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。