Question

7．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
When Molly's father was about to work，his daughter Molly，aged 8，hand him a bag．
The father was in hurry so he didn't know what was inside．While having lunch，he took out
the contents：a plastic dinosaur，a tiny sea shell and three small stone．The busy father
smiled，finished eating，and sweeping the desk clean into the dustbin include Molly's junk．
This evening，Molly wanted her bag back because she had not made a note into it：I love you，
Daddy．The father went to his office hurried，carrying the junk home．He asked Molly to tell
her about the junk．It was turned out that everything in the bag had a story．To Molly they
were not junk and treasures!

Answer 1

分析 Molly在爸爸上班之前交給爸爸一個(gè)包，里面裝著一些玩具和小石頭，在爸爸看來這是一堆垃圾，可是對(duì) Molly來說是她要送給爸爸的禮物，是一筆財(cái)富．

解答 When Molly's father was about to work，his daughter Molly，aged 8，hand him a bag．The father was in∧hurry so he didn't know what was inside．While having lunch，he took out the contents：a plastic dinosaur，a tiny sea shell and three small stone．The busy father smiled，finished eating，and sweeping the desk clean into the dustbin include Molly's junk．This evening，Molly wanted her bag back because she had not made a note into it：I love you，Daddy．The father went to his office hurried，carrying the junk home．He asked Molly to tell her about the junk．It was turned out that everything in the bag had a story．To Molly they
were not junk and treasures!
詳解：
1．hand改為handed；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，本文的基本時(shí)態(tài)是一般過去時(shí)，故此處也要用一般過去時(shí)handed．
2．in后加a；考查冠詞，in a hurry是固定搭配，意為"匆忙地"．
3．stone改為stones；考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，stone是可數(shù)名詞，前面有數(shù)詞three，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式stones．
4．sweeping改為swept；考查并列成分，此處swept與前面的smiled和finished并列作句子的謂語，故用一般過去時(shí)swept．
5．include改為including；考查介詞，including此處是介詞，和其后的名詞/代詞一起形成介賓短語，意思是"包括…在內(nèi)"
6．This改為That；考查代詞，此處是間接引語，意為"那天晚上…"，故用代詞that．
7．hurried改為hurriedly；考查副詞．此處用副詞做狀語修飾動(dòng)詞went，故用hurriedly．
8．her改為him；考查代詞．此處是指她的父親故用him．
9．was去掉；考查語態(tài)．此處是主動(dòng)語態(tài)，故去掉was．
10．a(chǎn)nd 改為but；考查連詞．前后詞之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用but．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 閱讀短文，了解大意，確定基本時(shí)態(tài)；運(yùn)用所掌握的基本知識(shí)多方面分析每個(gè)句子以及句子間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，找出文中錯(cuò)誤加以修改．