【題目】短文改錯 （共10分;每小題1分,滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）, 并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改： 在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Nowadays, there is a increasing number of people joining in the activities of volunteering．It’s well-known that volunteering jobs are making contributions to society with something in return．It’s as the Spirit of Lei Feng．However, knowing this, there are still many people would like to devote themselves to this trend．For instance, the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games had such many volunteers．They make lots of contributions to the success of the Olympics．Moreover, we can often see many students go to visit the old to take warm to them．Even though some people’s career is a volunteer．They are ready to helping others．Although the volunteers are much more common, we still need to thank they for devoting themselves to society．

【答案】

【1】將a改成an

【2】將something改成nothing

【3】將as改成like

【4】在people和would之間添加who

【5】將such改成so

【6】將make改成made

【7】將warm改成warmth

【8】將though去掉

【9】將helping改成help

【10】將they改成them

【解析】

【1】將a改成an 本題考查冠詞的用法，an用在發(fā)音以元音開頭的單個字母前面。

【2】將something改成nothing 志愿者服務就是不圖回報的，所以用nothing。

【3】將as改成like as作連接詞.她引導比較狀語從句和方式狀語從句,而且這兩種從句通常為省略句；like作介詞。

【4】在people和would之間添加who 本題考查定語從句，因為從句直接缺少主語，所以用who鏈接。

【5】將such改成so so many(如此多的...+名詞）

【6】將make改成made 考查動詞的時態(tài)，根據(jù)語境，改處應該填寫過去時態(tài)。

【7】將warm改成warmth 考查形容詞與名詞的用法。Take+名詞。

【8】將though去掉 本題考查讓步狀語從句，even though(=even if) 從屬連詞,意為:“即使, 即令……也……;”引導讓步狀語從句，而原文的句子是一個獨立的句子，不是從句，所以去掉。

【9】將helping改成help 考查固定搭配：be ready to do sth.

【10】將they改成them 考查主格和賓格的區(qū)別，tank（動詞）+賓語（賓格）

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