Question

11．There are few habits as annoying as someone making us wait．However，some punctually-challenged people have no intention of offending anyone．They still want to keep friends，family and bosses happy．They are often painfully aware and ashamed of the damage their lateness could do to their relationships，reputations，careers and finances．
Johnson，a doctor in New York，says his reputation for being unpunctual can sometimes be attributed to a misunderstanding of opinion．"A friend will ask me to come over，and he'll say'come anytime from seven．'But if I do turn up at eight or later，he will be annoyed．"
Joanna a teacher in London，for whom the most distressing thing is writing school reports，never makes the deadline for herself．"I always spend weeks carefully considering everything about the reports，"she says，"just for fear that any error arises．"

【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．用約30個(gè)單詞為以上材料撰寫概要；
2．用約120個(gè)單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）退到帶來的不良影響（至少兩點(diǎn)）；
（2）給Johnson和Joanna提出你的建議，至少兩條．
【寫作要求】
1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．不必寫標(biāo)題．
Different countries adopt different tolerance towards one's lateness．Actually，some people are late not deliberately but because they misunderstand others'opinions or pay too much attention to details．
As we all know，frequent lateness will have negative effects on one's daily life．On the one hand，unpunctual people tend to leave a bad impression on those who have made the appointment with them．Others usually regard being punctual as a sign of keeping the promise．On the other hand，lateness sometimes brings about much trouble in solving urgent problems．
Asfor those who are unintentionally late，like Johnson and Joanna，I have two suggestions as follows．First，whenever you make appointments with others，make sure you have understood all the details and try to get there a few minutes before the appointed time．Second，make good preparations for the appointments but never become too particular about every detail．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
Actually，some people are late not deliberately but because they misunderstand others'opinions or pay too much attention to details
事實(shí)上，有些人遲到不是故意而是因?yàn)樗麄冋`解了別人的意見或太注重細(xì)節(jié)．
高分句型二：
Second，make good preparations for the appointments but never become too particular about every detail．
其次，為約會(huì)準(zhǔn)備好，但不要太講究每一個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)．

解答 One possible version：
Different countries adopt different tolerance towards one's lateness．Actually，some people are late not deliberately but because they misunderstand others'opinions or pay too much attention to details（高分句型一）．
As we all know，frequent lateness will have negative effects on one's daily life．On the one hand，unpunctual people tend to leave a bad impression on those who have made the appointment with them．Others usually regard being punctual as a sign of keeping the promise．On the other hand，lateness sometimes brings about much trouble in solving urgent problems．
As for those who are unintentionally late，like Johnson and Joanna，I have two suggestions as follows．First，whenever you make appointments with others，make sure you have understood all the details and try to get there a few minutes before the appointed time．Second，make good preparations for the appointments but never become too particular about every detail（高分句型二）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．