假段定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

The day before yesterday, I went to the bookstore where is near our school to buy a reference book. It was Saturday, so there was many people. Under the help of the shop assistants, I quickly got the book I needed. I was about to leave when I found someone trying to steal a man’s money. Although I was nervous, but I tried to think of a way to help. Suddenly, a good idea came me. I stepped on the man’s foot on purposes. As I expected, the man’s scream gives the thief a fright, whom quickly walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation, the man smiled and showed great gratitude to him.

1.where--which

2.was--were

3.Under--With

4.去掉but

5.came∧to

6.purposes--purpose

7.gives-gave

8.whom--who

9.hear--hearing

10.him--me

【解析】

試題分析:題目主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)代詞、固定短語、時(shí)態(tài)、定語從句、there be句型等知識(shí)的掌握情況。時(shí)態(tài)、定語從句等是短文改錯(cuò)題?嫉闹R(shí)點(diǎn)。

1.

2. be句型。there be句型中be的單復(fù)數(shù)要根據(jù)后面的名詞來定,many people表示復(fù)數(shù)含義,謂語也用復(fù)數(shù),故把was改為were。

3. the help of sb在某人的幫助之下,故把Under改為With。

4. still連用,故去掉but。

5. to蘇醒,達(dá)成,共計(jì),突然想起,故在came后加to。

6. purpose故意地,是固定短語,故把purposes改為purpose。

7.考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)“The day before yesterday”可知,短文敘述的是過去的事情,應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí),故把gives改為gave。

8.考查非限制性定語從句。句中有逗號(hào),是非限制性定語從句,從句缺少主語,且指人,whom作賓語,故把whom改為who。

9.考查固定搭配。after在此是介詞,后跟動(dòng)名詞,相當(dāng)于after I heard...,故把hear改為hearing。

10.

考點(diǎn):考查代詞;固定短語;時(shí)態(tài);定語從句;there be句型

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