Question

【題目】短文改錯。

Almost all of us heard the story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we are little kids. What we can learn from the story is we must be honest. Therefore, there’re lots of phenomenon of dishonesty nowadays.

Being honest does great harm not only to other people and also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for an example. After drinking this kind of milk, the baby had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, what badly affected their health. To my great relief, the producers got accused and punished net all the serious consequences in the end.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】Are→were

【2】連詞that不能省

【3】Therefore→However

【4】Phenomenon→phenomenons

【5】dishonesty→dishonst

【6】also→but also

【7】for an example→for example

【8】baby→babies

【9】what→which

【10】my→our

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】根據(jù)主句動詞heard的時態(tài)可知,將are改為were。

【2】^ we must be honest是表語從句，其連詞that不能省。

【3】根據(jù)上下文可知，前后兩句語義轉(zhuǎn)折非因果，因而改Therefore為However。

【4】phenomenon是可數(shù)名詞，在lots of后應(yīng)是復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【5】根據(jù)句意可知，此處應(yīng)是dishonst才合乎文意。

【6】not only…but also 是固定搭配。

【7】take…for example是固定搭配，不用冠詞。

【8】此處根據(jù)the baby had big heads的heads可知一部分是babies。

【9】what badly affected their health是非限制性定語從句，因此，改what為which。

【10】To one’s great relief“某人大為欣喜的是”根據(jù)上下文可知應(yīng)是復(fù)數(shù)，因此改my為our。