Question

18．假定你是李華，現(xiàn)就讀于華陽一中．你校大門口有一條街，兩邊是商店、飯店，每當(dāng)上下班時他們總是占路擺攤，影響交通和環(huán)境．請你用英語給CHINA DAILY寫封信，反映這一情況．

影響	希望
1．行人、車輛難行；學(xué)生出入校門危險； 2．很多塑料袋、廢水使街道臟亂．	1．學(xué)校有一個干凈、安靜的環(huán)境； 2．采取一些措施．

注意：
1．書信應(yīng)包括表中全部內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文流暢、連貫；
2．字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右；=3．參考詞匯：小攤stall．

Answer 1

分析 本文為書信．寫作目的是：反映學(xué)校門口占路擺攤影響交通和環(huán)境的現(xiàn)象．
寫作要點為：1，反映其不好的影響；2，希望．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm a student of Huayang No.1 Middle School．In front of our school gate is a street，on both sides of which are many shops and restaurants．Every day during rush hour，especially at noon，stalls selling everyday goods and food appear on the street，which makes it terribly crowded．First，cars and passersby have difficulty in passing through the street．Thus it makes it dangerous for the students to go in or out of school．Secondly，the street is made dirty with so many plastic bags and waste water everywhere．
A school，in my opinion，should be a place with clean and quiet surroundings．So I do hope some measures should be taken to improve the situation．
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

點評 考生需注意書信格式．考生需根據(jù)所給的表格信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，仔細(xì)構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．