8．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的間用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多若（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Dear Ms Jenkins，
I'm Li Hua，a Senior 3 student from No.5 Secondary School．I would like offer my apology for being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday．
The reason is because I have got a cold，and the doctor suggests that I lay in bed for one week or OS．But don't worry．I have asked friend of me，Ham Meimei，to go there instead．She is very experiencing in making Chinese knots．She will drop in at your apartment at 9：00 on this Saturday morning．
Please allow me to say sorry again．I have the confidences that you can learn what to make Chinese knots．Wish you good time!
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 這是一封道歉信．
我要為在周六沒有能夠教給你制作中國結(jié)而道歉，因?yàn)槲腋忻傲耍艺埮笥秧n梅梅替我去教你，她對制作中國結(jié)很有經(jīng)驗(yàn)，她會在周六上午九點(diǎn)去你家，我相信你會學(xué)會的．

解答 Dear Ms Jenkins，
I'm Li Hua，a Senior 3 student from No.5 Secondary School．I would like∧offer my apology for∧being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday．
The reason is because I have got a cold，and the doctor suggests that I lay in bed for one week or OS．But don't worry．I have asked∧friend of me，Ham Meimei，to go there instead．She is very experiencing in making Chinese knots．She will drop in at your apartment at 9：00 on this Saturday morning．
Please allow me to say sorry again．I have the confidences that you can learn what to make Chinese knots．Wish you∧good time!
解析：
1．offer前加to．考查非謂語動(dòng)詞．would like 用動(dòng)詞不定式做賓語，所以offer前加to．    
2．being前加not/able---unable．考查邏輯一致．本句表示"我要為在周六沒有能夠交給你制作中國結(jié)而道歉"，所以being前加not/able---unable．    
3．because---that．考查表語從句的引導(dǎo)詞．表示"理由是"應(yīng)該用The reason is…that，所以用that．
4．lay---lie．考查名詞性從句的虛擬．the doctor suggests 表示"醫(yī)生建議"，所以賓語從句的謂語動(dòng)詞用（should）   do，所以用動(dòng)詞原形lie．
5．friend前加a；me-mine．考查雙重所有格．表示"我的一個(gè)朋友"用a friend of mine．
6．experiencing---experienced．考查單詞辨析．本句表示"她是有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的"，所以用形容詞experienced．
7 去掉on． 考查介詞． this Saturday morning前不用介詞，所以 去掉on．
8．confidences---confidence．考查名詞． confidence是不可數(shù)名詞，所以沒有復(fù)數(shù)．    
9．what---how．考查疑問詞．表示"怎樣制造中國結(jié)"應(yīng)該用how to make Chinese knots．     
10．good time前加a．考查冠詞．good time表示"一段美好是時(shí)光"，所以前加a．

點(diǎn)評 考查短文改錯(cuò)．
短文改錯(cuò)時(shí)要注意一下幾點(diǎn)：1．快速閱讀，整體把握短文大意．2．重視語境以及上下文的關(guān)系．3．充分運(yùn)用基礎(chǔ)語言知識找出錯(cuò)誤所在．

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