Question

9．假定你是學(xué)生李華．今年9月將赴美國(guó)進(jìn)修學(xué)習(xí)4個(gè)月．請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)筆友Peter寫(xiě)一封郵件，希望他能幫你找一個(gè)合租房．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．對(duì)房子的要求；2．對(duì)室友的要求；3．表達(dá)感謝．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾己為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Peter，
I am writing to ask a favor of you．This September，I am going to have a 4-month further study in the USA．I wonder if you could help me find proper accommodation．（高分句型一）
About the flat，can you find one with a kitchen？I am not quite used to the western food，so I would like to cook myself．Besides，Internet connection is a must．As you know，some assignments have to be submitted through the Internet．（高分句型二）
To lower the cost，I prefer to share the flat with a roommate，hopefully，a native English speaker so that I can practice my spoken English．（高分句型三）Also，I hope my roommate is friendly and easy-going．I would be grateful for your help．．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是學(xué)生李華．今年9月將赴美國(guó)進(jìn)修學(xué)習(xí)4個(gè)月．請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)筆友Peter寫(xiě)一封郵件，希望他能幫你找一個(gè)合租房．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：對(duì)房子的要求；對(duì)室友的要求；表達(dá)感謝． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be used to 習(xí)慣于；Besides另外；prefer to do更喜歡做；hopefully希望的是；be grateful for對(duì)…表示感謝；Look forward to盼望；
I wonder if you could help me find proper accommodation．（高分句型一）
As you know，some assignments have to be submitted through the Internet．（高分句型二）
To lower the cost，I prefer to share the flat with a roommate，hopefully，a native English speaker so that I can practice my spoken English．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      I am writing to ask a favor of you．This September，I am going to have a 4-month further study in the USA．I wonder if you could help me find proper accommodation．（高分句型一）
      About the flat，can you find one with a kitchen？I am not quite used to the western food，so I would like to cook myself．Besides，Internet connection is a must．As you know，some assignments have to be submitted through the Internet．（高分句型二）
      To lower the cost，I prefer to share the flat with a roommate，hopefully，a native English speaker so that I can practice my spoken English．（高分句型三）Also，I hope my roommate is friendly and easy-going．I would be grateful for your help．
      Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．