Question

19．假定你是李華．你校將于周四晚上舉辦一場(chǎng)英語(yǔ)演講比賽．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給外教Charlie寫一封邀請(qǐng)函，邀請(qǐng)他擔(dān)任評(píng)委．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．比賽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)：6月8日，周四晚7點(diǎn)至9點(diǎn)，報(bào)告廳．
2．演講主題：中西文化差異．
3．參賽選手：高二學(xué)生．
4．評(píng)判內(nèi)容：語(yǔ)音、語(yǔ)調(diào)（intonation）、內(nèi)容等．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Charlie，
I'm honored to invite you to be the judge of an English speech contest to be held this Thursday evening，July 6th，at the lecture hall．Competitors are from Grade Two and the topic of the speech is about culture differences between China and western countries．Speeches will be graded based on competitors'pronunciation，intonation and the content of the speech．The two-hour event will begin at 7：00 p．m．，and please be here a little earlier so I can explain to you more details．Please contact me at 1234567@qq．com if necessary．
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)是一封邀請(qǐng)信，要求根據(jù)學(xué)校將于周四晚上舉辦一場(chǎng)英語(yǔ)演講比賽．用英語(yǔ)給外教Charlie寫一封邀請(qǐng)函，邀請(qǐng)他擔(dān)任評(píng)委．應(yīng)該以第一人稱為主，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來(lái)時(shí)來(lái)寫．要注意邀請(qǐng)信的格式：要先說明寫信的目的，然后交代1．比賽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)：6月8日，周四晚7點(diǎn)至9點(diǎn)，報(bào)告廳．2．演講主題：中西文化差異．3．參賽選手：高二學(xué)生．4．評(píng)判內(nèi)容：語(yǔ)音、語(yǔ)調(diào)（intonation）、內(nèi)容等．最后交代希望對(duì)方到來(lái)．寫作時(shí)要注意目的明確，條理清楚，還要盡量使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型增加文章亮點(diǎn)
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：如不定式to invite you和to be held的運(yùn)用，一般將來(lái)時(shí)的被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)will be graded；還運(yùn)用了詞語(yǔ)be honored to，based on，Looking forward to等．
I'm honored to invite you to be the judge of an English speech contest to be held this Thursday evening，July 6th，at the lecture hall．（高分句型一）
Speeches will be graded based on competitors'pronunciation，intonation and the content of the speech．（高分句型二）
The two-hour event will begin at 7：00 p．m．，and please be here a little earlier so I can explain to you more details．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Charlie，
      I'm honored to invite you to be the judge of an English speech contest to be held this Thursday evening，July 6th，at the lecture hall．（高分句型一）Competitors are from Grade Two and the topic of the speech is about culture differences between China and western countries．Speeches will be graded based on competitors'pronunciation，intonation and the content of the speech．（高分句型二）The two-hour event will begin at 7：00 p．m．，and please be here a little earlier so I can explain to you more details．（高分句型三）Please contact me at 1234567@qq．com if necessary．
      Looking forward to your coming!
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．