Question

3．學(xué)校即將舉辦"讀書節(jié)"，目前正廣泛征集"讀書節(jié)"宣傳冊圖片．假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生潘陽，你已找到以下三幅圖片，決定給讀書節(jié)組委會寫一封信，推薦其中一幅，你的信須包括以下內(nèi)容：

1．簡單描述你想推薦的那幅圖片；
2．闡述你用這幅圖片宣傳"讀書節(jié)"的理由．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"圖表+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息給讀書節(jié)組委會寫一封信，推薦其中一幅圖片，描述圖片同時闡述推薦理由，既是提綱作文又是圖畫類作文．時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱用第二和第三人稱．重要短語：around the corner（即將到來），recommend sth to…．（推薦什么給），remind sb of sth （提醒某人…．），as far as I'm concerned （就我所知道的而言），turn out to be（結(jié)果是），not only…．，but also…．（不僅，而且），enhance …．understanding of…..（增強(qiáng)…..的理解），take sth into consideration…．（把…..考慮在內(nèi)）．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
Since the Reading Festival is around the corner，I'm writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading．
In the picture，three students are sitting at the table，discussing heatedly what they have just read．【高分句型】It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion．（描述圖片）Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration，as far as I'm concerned，it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated．Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots．You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can't help sharing it with your classmates or best friends，who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well．【高分句型】The moment you mention the book，the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own．【高分句型】My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that，through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself，but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers，which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book．【高分句型】To sum up，the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading，instead of being dull and isolating，can be full of participation and common interest．（闡述推薦該圖片的理由）I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Pan Yang

點評 寫好這類圖片及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等．